Addiction, anthropomorphic, needle/vein, rapetwetwe123January 26 2009, 13:18:29 UTC
She whispers promises in the sweetest voice he’s ever heard. She tells tales of the joys contained within her, the bliss and forgetfulness that can be bought at the cost of just a tiny pinch of pain. And though her deal sounds so good, she’s lying. It really is too good to be true and Vein wants no part of it anymore. He’s made mistakes, dear god he’s made mistakes, but there’s always time to fix them. He’d always believed that nothing was unforgivable
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Re: Addiction, anthropomorphic, needle/vein, raperekindle956January 26 2009, 23:19:24 UTC
I don't know where to start. This is too good, so gratifyingly scary, if that makes some sense. I love the fact that the established relationship is stated. That you made "Needle" a "she".Even if that wasn't what I would have expected.She slaps him and pulls the shirt down again just a bit until it covers his head, twisting it, knotting it. Vein twitches, reaching to pull it off, but she slaps his covered face again and again. and ...as he hardens under those fingers, the addiction roaring back into full life, and as she lowers herself onto him he can’t stop himself from groaning in relief. That last line.
This one is my prompt, and I got much more that I expected. I thank you so much for giving me this!
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This one is my prompt, and I got much more that I expected. I thank you so much for giving me this!
Thank you, thank you, thank you...
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