This was an amazing ride. Round of applause for you. Had me in tears, but only because I wanted Gabe to be innocent. I still say he is, anyway. Thanks for such a realistic arc.
Ending. Beautiful., and so fitting. Thanks for the ride - it's been a long and difficult, but beautiful, one.
Pete, right next to his ear, screamed, "Motherfuck it, yes!"
Couldn't have said it better myself, Wentzy. And this whole paragraph:
The minute they're out of the car, his friends-because they were, weren't they, the best friends he could have asked for and maybe a little bit like a family, like Ryan had said-flocked to him, around him, Pete and Patrick and Andy and Joe at his shoulders and Brendon and Spencer and Jon at his back and Mike holding his hand and Siska nudged up next to him and the Butcher with his hand warm on William's arm and Chislett at Mike’s side and Ryan grabbed his other hand, squeezed tight. They came to the door with at least twice as many people as they'd left the curb with-Hayley and Zac and Bob and Greta and Travis and D and it was practically the entire label that walked William through the door and into the courtroom.Loved it, because it was just, so, what we all love and write and these boys,
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Yes. The ending. Just yes.
I wish I had joined lj sooner.
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Pete, right next to his ear, screamed, "Motherfuck it, yes!"
Couldn't have said it better myself, Wentzy. And this whole paragraph:
The minute they're out of the car, his friends-because they were, weren't they, the best friends he could have asked for and maybe a little bit like a family, like Ryan had said-flocked to him, around him, Pete and Patrick and Andy and Joe at his shoulders and Brendon and Spencer and Jon at his back and Mike holding his hand and Siska nudged up next to him and the Butcher with his hand warm on William's arm and Chislett at Mike’s side and Ryan grabbed his other hand, squeezed tight. They came to the door with at least twice as many people as they'd left the curb with-Hayley and Zac and Bob and Greta and Travis and D and it was practically the entire label that walked William through the door and into the courtroom.Loved it, because it was just, so, what we all love and write and these boys, ( ... )
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