This makes me kinda not able to breath. It makes me hurt. A kind of aching stab in the heart. I'm not sure if you meant it to be, my sleep deprived brain probably didn't catch half of this storys amazingness, but it was beautifully tragic. Tantalizing and captivating. Really spectacular! I loved it! <3<3 -Rissa
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I don't usually like 2nd POV, it's really difficult to write make it work but this is incredibly powerful and the imagery is just gorgeous
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This makes me kinda not able to breath.
It makes me hurt.
A kind of aching stab in the heart.
I'm not sure if you meant it to be, my sleep deprived brain probably didn't catch half of this storys amazingness, but it was beautifully tragic. Tantalizing and captivating.
Really spectacular!
I loved it!
<3<3
-Rissa
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I had to read over come of it a few times though.
Coz I'm slow and get confused easily
But yeah.
Awesome.
And "Three cheers you fooled them all" is from Hospital, not Pretty Handsome Awkward. :)
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