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Jan 08, 2007 17:43

Title: You're Just A Boy Who's Afraid Of The Dark (9/10 ( Read more... )

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star_light_star January 9 2007, 02:40:41 UTC
I've read this story completly through twice now and ABSOULOUTLY LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Please, pleasepleasepleaseplease update soon.
I think I might die if you don't.
I love it so much.

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symmetry January 9 2007, 02:52:16 UTC
I completely adore this story. Normally I'm not too fond of stories like this because no one can pull them off properly it seems. But with this, you totally pull it off. Pull it off x 21231531564. I think what you've done to Will's mental state and the brainwashing that's happened is by far the most realistic I've seen in this fandom or any other. It's horrible that I really want Gabe to keep him for another 10 chapters because I really don't want this story to end.

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chibigirl626 January 9 2007, 03:14:20 UTC
It was this line that just completely won me over.

“I love you,” was the first thing that came to mind and he was simultaneously disgusted and fascinated to realize that yeah.

Yeah.

He did.

This fic is just amazingly realistic. Especially with the way William's half brain-washed, and Gabe's a deranged kdnapper who doesn't seem capable of hurting someone, until Will does something to piss him off... is it wrong that I don't want this fic to end, even though you've already decided the amount of chapters?

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necromance January 9 2007, 03:15:53 UTC
A Transcripts of my EXACT thoughts on the ending:
"holy mother humping shit
gabe is dead?
no, you didn't
or did you?
holy shit
gabe is dead!
And William Still Loves Him!!!!!!!"

*offers will a place in bed inbetween me and Damian Kulash eating strawberry ice cream and watching spongebob*

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rsiobhan January 9 2007, 03:23:46 UTC
Oh man, I've read this like four times now (uh, yeah, slightly obsessive, I know) and I have to say that the following gets me every time.

Because sure, he knew he was wrong. He knew he should have answered the phone, shouldn’t have let them know where he was, should have just obeyed for once in his goddamn life, but he still couldn’t help but wonder why Pete hadn’t sent help yet.

He’d promised to.

!!!!!
That's all I got.

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