So, this is totally and completely brilliant, and it would be fab to get another chapter, but one of the great things about how you wrote this is it doesn't really need it.
i never thought i would actually want to see that movie. but the fact that this fic was "inspired" by it, is totally making me reconsider my dislike for ben stiller movies as of late. which is to say, i think this is rockin and can't wait for more.
What it didn’t explain, though, was why Patrick was taking this so calmly. Why he didn’t freak the fuck out when the boy said, in what he probably considered an entirely rational tone of voice, “My exhibit’s right down that hallway.” And why Patrick’s first thought when he added, “My name’s Peter,” was a dazed Well, at least I’m not going to get fired for this.
So, how much do I love this paragraph? A lot. I love how you wrote Patrick as really so resigned to everything in his life that he doesn't really bat an eyelash when he meets a zombie.
And also, Pete? Likes Patrick's singing. How awesome is that?
Oh, and Andy as the PETA crusader...yes. Yes. That is all.
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But the thing is....we want it. Please.
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which is to say, i think this is rockin and can't wait for more.
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So, how much do I love this paragraph? A lot. I love how you wrote Patrick as really so resigned to everything in his life that he doesn't really bat an eyelash when he meets a zombie.
And also, Pete? Likes Patrick's singing. How awesome is that?
Oh, and Andy as the PETA crusader...yes. Yes. That is all.
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