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Mar 10, 2007 12:44

Title: Progress Of The Wolf (Standalone)

Rating: R

Pairing: Zacky/Brian, Matt/Zacky, Johnny/Jimmy

Summary: A quick character sketch of pack dynamics. Experimenting with style.

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riraito_shite March 11 2007, 02:42:42 UTC
This was reallyreally good. I like how brief the scenes were. How snapshot and short but to the point some of them were like when Zack was growing or he got the kill. And I think the thing I absolutely loved the most about it was just how you kind of slam us right into the middle of the story and we don't really know what's going on at all and can really feel along with Zack's confusion at first. aksdh and that's the point where my brain fizzes at the awesomeness of this. So amazing job!

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oxygen_losers March 11 2007, 14:25:56 UTC
...your brain fizzes? Mine has given up on life because you reviewed something I wrote. And you're pretty much amazing. And...just...wow.

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loves_music17 March 11 2007, 19:39:53 UTC
OMG. When I saw the summary I was like "what?" but then I started reading it & was like "wow!" totally adding to my memories...
This story was so unique & well written. you did a fantastic job in my book! <3333

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sun_n_stars_666 April 2 2007, 22:50:57 UTC
WOW. This was like REALLY good.
Like REALLY REALLY good.
Never read a wolf-type fic before. And this was just -wow-
[[is speechless]]...

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