I'm late and just spent the whole last hour reading your entire story, and wow. Just wow. I don't leave comments often, usually only when I feel I could offer some concrit, but I simply had to comment on this. No, I can't offer any concrit. I think you've written this beautifully. Sure, there's the occasional spelling error, and a part or two that I think may have been a bit rushed, but besides that, it's damn near perfect. I think this is one of my favorites. I love stories where the main characters is put into some intense situations (though that word isn't even close to describing what Bill was put through in this story.), and end up being very fragile characters. I may be a total weirdo for that, but whatever. You've done a wonderful job of illustrating such.
I love this, keep up the good work. I know this comment is extremely long, but it's what it took for me to tell you just how I feel.
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Anyway, it's intriguing, I definitely can't wait for more!
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Yay for William, can't wait to see what really happens though.
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Coming across this update has made my insomnia...
Very good chapter. Just, really good. Extremely good.
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I love this, keep up the good work. I know this comment is extremely long, but it's what it took for me to tell you just how I feel.
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