you never left, always here with me

Jul 28, 2009 10:19

Title: Goodbye
Pairing: G-Ri
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jiyong's flying to Europe tomorrow. Seungri wants to say goodbye.
AN: I know, this one's over due. I wanted to post this for the longest time. But~. And yes! This is a very very late birthday fic for sugarbunnyxx ! March 25! She requested smut and it was around Ji's vacation for Europe that I finally got the ( Read more... )

parallel universe, nc-17, bigbang. fanfiction

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oxygenlove July 28 2009, 02:33:29 UTC
spot for sugarbunnyxx

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oxygenlove July 28 2009, 02:40:20 UTC
ZOMG I'M READING YOUR FIC TOO! RIGHT NOW! HAHA~

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oxygenlove July 29 2009, 19:57:40 UTC
thank you. reading yours (which totally got me inspired and wanting to write more and better GRi), this comment means a lot.
coincidentally, that was also my favorite line :)

thank you~

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haelin July 28 2009, 02:39:14 UTC
SPOT! my net is back sooooo you know already i'mma read this now..=)

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oxygenlove July 28 2009, 02:42:42 UTC
LOL~ glad your net's back~ HAHA~ i miss you spotting on my stuff so fast!

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haelin July 28 2009, 02:46:49 UTC
i'm a little late this time coz i was watching BB Virus parody..=) LOOOOL! but next time, i'll be first again..=)

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haelin July 28 2009, 05:34:18 UTC
i am 3 hours behind.. sorry..

BUT THE SMUT! seryoso ka na may phobia ka dearest krizza? COZ THIS IS AWESOME! seriously!

ayan na, sumasakit na ulo ko.. sintomas ng magandang fic pag sumasakit siya..

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!

as expected from dearest krizza..=)

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so_much_kimchi July 28 2009, 02:49:15 UTC
I LOVED that SLASH//ing in the beginning! Funny on so many levels~~ kkk

Also, "suck me wet" is officially one of the hottest things you can say to ANYONE and when people say it to Ri-ri it's just perfection (because deep down, Ri-ri is a slut and we all know that~)... yaaah that was Brilliance*

This was one of the best goodbyes ever. I hope the return Home will be just as fabulous for my favourite boys~~~ Amazing work, as always... You really pulled off the porny bits!! <33 for this, of course, as always =^_^=

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oxygenlove July 29 2009, 20:08:25 UTC
glad you mentioned that! i loved putting that part in so i'm glad someone pointed it out!

hhe~ i thought it was pretty hot, that's why i put it and yesssss.... :) just watching his performances of Strong Baby and seeing him slide his hands down his thigh... DAMN HIM. and ti think that "Jiyong hyung and I talked about the concept" ROFL.

i just thought it'd be great to have a goodbye like this. HAHA. "pulled off" sounds so nice~ i'm glad i did cause i was seriously worried. this is my second smut and i am so not comfortable with writing it... yet.

thanks for reading!~

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minn_rox July 28 2009, 03:08:44 UTC
i cant spot now since i'm not first..

i read it!!! yeay..and i'm so HAPPY..i'm floating with happiness..

gosh..you seemed to get better every time..you know i love your fics rite? but now i love you too..*huggles*

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oxygenlove July 29 2009, 20:00:16 UTC
lol, my smut is getting better? that sounds good!

thanks for reading!

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