i'm all up for a war against my own heart

Oct 13, 2010 14:48

Title: All Under Control
Pairing: G-Ri
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Old issues, not beta'd
Summary: Jiyong's thinking and Seungri is scheming. Neither succeeds.
AN: I'll be extremely happy if anybody gets what I'm trying to say. And happy birthday to me!!!~

I've got it all under control. I have the manual just right here. )

parallel universe, bigbang, pg-13, fanfiction

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tees2mai October 13 2010, 13:20:02 UTC
Happy Birthday bb ♥

I'll be back after finishing my english essay D:

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oxygenlove October 15 2010, 11:58:43 UTC
Essays... /ewwwwww

Thank you with a million ♥

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tees2mai October 17 2010, 06:11:00 UTC
sorry it took me so long to comment. uni has been sucking the life out of me :(

I like your new layout, it's pretty.

trust you to write an angsty fic for your birthday. reading this makes me feel sad. they both know there's something more between them but they hide behind fanservice because it's easy and they're both scared of it.

They've practiced this a million times that Jiyong can almost feel the words imprinted at the tip of his tongue, almost like acid waiting to burn his throat if he speaks it out of context.
favorite lines. he can't say anything to seungri unless a camera is there.

"And I'll ask, 'Is it me?'"

Yes, Seungri. Always.


big bang might come back in three weeks! I'm so excited!! and I need to go to the yg fam concert. why don't I live in korea ;___;

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oxygenlove October 18 2010, 03:53:33 UTC
i feel you there. uni has been taking up every minute of my life too :X

oh thank you! since my two sisters, ichigosmile and lovetoosweet, asked me to do their layouts (of course i only modified pre-made ones), i thought, i also need a new one! haha!

exactly :D yes yes yes! that is IT! well, half of it, actually. there's another angle but that one that you pointed out is most definitely the whole thing in a few words :) you are a genius!

and i love angst so i needed this. haha.

he can't say anything sweet without it being treated like fanservice. yes omg yes. hur.



I KNOOOOOOOWWWWW!!!!! i am not believing anything until yg says something, and even then i'll doubt it cause we all know how yg is with dates BUT OMG. haha.

a million ♥ to you!

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tiloveji October 13 2010, 14:48:47 UTC
HAPPY BIRTHDAY !
I miss your fics sfm ^^

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oxygenlove October 15 2010, 11:59:23 UTC
Aw! Yep, I've been busy so fics have become hard to write :(
And Thank you!!!

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ijiified October 13 2010, 15:06:48 UTC
Happy birthday girly. Hey, yknow, I'm actually (shock! :0) working on a GD/Seungri fanfic..... I'll probably never finish, but hey! I finished the first chapter, and it's with beta now. <3

In other news, how's life treating you?

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stupidefleurk October 13 2010, 19:54:53 UTC
You don't know how many times I read your fics u_u <333

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oxygenlove October 15 2010, 12:07:15 UTC
Same here! :)

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oxygenlove October 15 2010, 12:03:42 UTC
OMG YOU JWSNJNKSJA!!!!!!
I still read your fics everyday (er, when I have the time) and omg..... /pounce

AND NO WAY. THIS. OMG YOU. WRITING A G-Ri fic. UGHNHJASNH!!!

If it will never see the light of er- LJ, I can, read it? The unfinished version BUT OMG THIS IS JUST.

^ is it obvious that i love you? haha.

Life... I'm barely alive. School's been the central part of my life these couple of months. Courses I took this semester are too 'high maintenance'. I think I overestimated my time. And capabilities.

But you! How about you. Oh. I'm barely on LJ unlike before but oh how I miss everything!

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unactivist October 13 2010, 17:38:59 UTC
It's hard to distinguish which ones are answerable and sincere and which ones are malicious and intends to corner him. - intends => intend. :D /freak

anyway, i totally get what you're getting at in this fic, or at least i think i do. i've always enjoyed it when authors play with the format and skew from the regular dialogue/description/dialogue/dialogue sort of thing. i love your jiyong, he's so perfect when he's trying so hard to not try too hard. /makes no sense.

i love this too, dear. lol. /pets.

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oxygenlove October 15 2010, 12:24:19 UTC
Thank you, fixed!~

Oh oh oh! I want to know how you interpret it. I'm curious, really, as it seems that this can be read in different ways :) Please do so when you have the time!

Not confusing, no. I feel more comfortable with this format. If you've read my other stuff, I have a lot which were written like this :)

And thank you thank you thank you ♥

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unactivist October 13 2010, 17:39:35 UTC
Oh, and, happy birthday! MAY AL YOUR WISHES COME TRUE. *\o/*

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oxygenlove October 15 2010, 12:12:03 UTC
THANK YOU WITH LOVE AND A ♥

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