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pairing: homin, rating: r

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bbyah May 12 2013, 21:51:48 UTC
.....
gahhh I was not ready for this story.
speechless, this was so GORGEOUS! I've really been in the mood for some good magic realism and this really hit the spot. The last world was so painful, poor dudes ;;;;
excellent story, every word really counted :>

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oyabeun May 14 2013, 00:54:31 UTC
ahh thank you! haha tbh the last world was supposed to be during the hospital when yunho had the, uh, the glue incident P: but i'm glad it met your expectations!

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pichiruchi May 13 2013, 01:16:42 UTC
s p e e c h l e s s.
dear i could picture the whole thing in my head like a movie and it felt so real and with the right amount of confusion and... just everything in here <3
the part where poor min got hit by car .. I saw the whole thing in slow motion just like Yunho and I really wish i could draw to show it it to you :CCC I swear it was bitterly sweet beautiful :CCC thanks for this
gahhh I missed fics like this!
<3
-memms-

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oyabeun May 14 2013, 00:55:32 UTC
ooh another speechless reader, i like! (-;
aw well even if you aren't able to give an actual visual, as long as you have the visual in your head, it's good enough. bitterly sweet beautiful eh? haha
thank you!!

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screaminpka May 13 2013, 05:26:43 UTC
*speechless*

this is so beautiful, thank you m(__)m

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oyabeun May 14 2013, 00:56:12 UTC
third speechless in a row, i'm on a roll! lmao ❤
no, thank you, dear reader.

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akarinami984 May 13 2013, 11:04:52 UTC
It's so grim as the color gray, yet thick and filling as the color as well. My heart just seems to saturate with this feeling. ToT

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oyabeun May 14 2013, 00:56:53 UTC
grey, hm? sounds pretty accurate! haha aw is that a good feeling? the saturation.

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akarinami984 May 14 2013, 01:51:21 UTC
I would think so. It just feels like when I'm trying to envision the scenes, my vision is just all colored over in grey..... making the scenes even more grim and grave, yet the emotion between the two more earnest and solemn as well.... I guess that is what I meant when I was referring to the saturation of the heart due to these honest yet gloomy scenes involving the pitiful couple.

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akarinami984 May 14 2013, 01:53:04 UTC
So I guess to the couple: candid sympathy and to you, author: praise and applause

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thisacekid May 13 2013, 12:56:40 UTC
I've always wanted to read something like this in the fandom, alterate universes and all. and then this came along <3
i could symphatize with yunho and that "i" "love" "you" gaaah.
this was beautifully written and i love that it ended with this reality.

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oyabeun May 14 2013, 00:58:09 UTC
there are plenty fanfics about, well, alternate universes&all out there if you just dig deep & hard enough! c-:
omg i'm glad you noticed!! it was actually supposed to be "changmin, i love you," haha but you got it all spot on!
thank you! ❤

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