Season 3 Redux - 3.05 Residence Evil

[oz_black_cat]

Rating: R for language and abuse
Word Count: 5,227
Category: AU-ing Season 3. They didn't do it right
Spoilers: You should've watched the whole lot anyway, but this is only up to and including 3.05
Disclaimer: The characters were created by Rob Thomas and remain the property of Thomas, the CW, and Warner Bros. Television. No infringement is intended,

Comments

[dishyfishy]

Ack! As torturous as it is to be left wondering about so many things, I did love this chapter. I love fics that examine Logan's time with Aaron, and this was just great. I felt nervous and nauseous reading the scene with the cigarette lighter, just waiting for it to happen. Aaron really was a sick son of a bitch, and you really captured that- all his threatening little touches, forcing Logan to sign the papers... Also, I'm so used to your chapters being in two parts, I yelled in frustration when I got to the end! I was ready to click and have some answers revealed!

So, is the girl on the slab connected to Charlie at all, or are they two separate deaths? Is there any chance you'll tell me? I'm gonna guess no :P

So excited for the next chapter! I've been checking like mad since Thursday, but we had a huge storm early Saturday morning, and a power surge fried our router. Finally getting back on line and finding this was a great treat!

[oz_black_cat]

Sure i'll tell you... the person on the balcony is------- oh wait, no i won't tell you :p I didn't get this evil cape for nothing you know!

Thanks so much for following this story, I'm sorry to leave you hanging for a few extra days. I really did mean to keep in my 2 week deadline, but damn writer's block had me forstumpfed. I am working on the next as we speak, and am going to do my hardest to get within the 2 week deadline this time.

[ajzkitten69]

I love the part about his mom restocking the medicine cabinet. That was just amazing. And the last line totally had me close to tears. And I'm desperately looking forward to more.

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks so much for the comment! Though, obviously not good about making you close to tears... I am working on the next part as we speak, I promise :)

[sanya4]

I loved this chapter, even though we still don't know what exactly happened "last night" that they really need to discuss. I really liked the way you wrote the interaction between Aaron and Logan, they both seemed very in character to me. The scene in the car with the lighter was heartbreaking. I'm (im)patiently waiting for the next chapter :)

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks for the comment - I'm really pleased my Logan/Aaron came out well as I definitely struggled with writing Aaron to begin with. I promise to answer... some... of the other cliffhangers next chapter ;) which won't be long.

[mitzy_spain]

one of the things I like about your fic is the mystery around everything and that you always leave me waiting for more...

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks for the comment! I'll try to not have you wanting more for too long :)

[danceprincess20]

I just found this fic randomly and read the entire thing tonight. I am dying for more, amazing job, it's really well written.

[oz_black_cat]

Thank you so much! I have half the next chapter written so am looking good for keeping in my 2 week deadline per chapter. Glad that your random find turned out well :)