Season 3 Redux - 3.07 Twice the Men

[oz_black_cat]

Rating: R for language
Word Count: 5,970
Category: AU-ing Season 3. They didn't do it right
Spoilers: You should've watched the whole lot anyway, but this is only up to and including 3.07
Disclaimer: The characters were created by Rob Thomas and remain the property of Thomas, the CW, and Warner Bros. Television. No infringement is intended, no profit

Comments

[dishyfishy]

Yay! I just got into town last night, and seeing this this morning was a great surprise!

Ugh, As I was reading, I just knew that moment with Piz would be in here. In a way, I like it. Piz was usually just shown as a cute, innocent puppy, but that moment with that smirk is very telling.

I really hope Veronica pays more attention to Wallace and figures out what's going on. I love that you have her realizing how she's been ignoring Wallace, as opposed to the real season 3 where we just...didn't see him.

I really hope Logan and Veronica are able to connect soon! I definitely felt their frustration every time they missed each other. These comments feel pretty half-assed, but I'll use jet lag as an excuse. I loved it, and can't wait for the next chapter!

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks for the comment as always :-) I was worried you might be upset for it only being a one-parter again! Lol. Yeah, Piz is not a cute puppy to me...

[medjunkie]

Hurray! A new chapter, I really thought this one was particularly well written, some great lines in this, and some wonderful observations too. I just hope Logan and Veronica find each other soon :)
That Piz, what a smug bastard....

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed some of the lines. I really enjoy writing the dialogue, but then realise some episodes are 95% talking :)

[spygrrl76]

Oh, too short1 :) But really great. I love how you put road blocks in Logan and Veronica's relationship that are realistic and not over the top. This definitely the kind of stuff I would have liked to have seen in the show during S3. Like the changes with Logan and Charlie as well. I am intrigued by all 3 cases - Majorie, Charlie and Wallace. Can't wait for more.

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks for the comment! Yes, this episode was a little shorter than others, but I didn't want to delve into too many of the plots all in one go. Have to wait for the next episode for that :) Which, I know I say this a lot, I hope won't be too far away...

[holly96]

Ugh. I really hope Veronica is able to find Logan. He shouldn't do this alone, and if she knew Veronica wouldn't want him to do it alone, either. So far it's pretty organic (sometimes people play phone tag through no one's fault), but I hope it doesn't stray into unnecessary roadblock territory. I get pretty weary with easily avoidable misunderstandings in fics. I don't think you've gone there yet, just stating for the record. ;-)

[oz_black_cat]

Record duly noted! :) Thanks for the comment. I do know what you mean. I hope I don't become a frustrating author though!

[miss_v_mars]

Aw i am loving this fic. Veronica is making much more process with expressing her feelings than she did in the actual season 3, although she still has a fair way to go. I am loving the relationships she was with logan and her friends. i am not liking Piz though lol he annoys me. I hope we get to see some more wallace soon. :)

[oz_black_cat]

Thanks for the comment! Yeah, Piz is annoying :) I make no apologies for writing him as such... I'm glad to hear that you are loving the fic though