Oziversary Fest Fic: Sympathy for the God

Jul 13, 2017 03:43

Prompts: “What kind of fairy dust have you been snorting?”
“You wanna be careful of playing God once too often. If you're not careful, the real one's gonna get very pissed off.”
Title: Sympathy for the God
Pairing: B/K
Notes: Canon-compliant. Missing scene. Mid-Season 4.
Warnings: PG-13. Drug use.
Word Count: 696
Summary:
“Set up the pieces; knock ( Read more... )

by: pride_of_erin, ch: oziversary

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mazephoenix July 12 2017, 21:21:27 UTC
That's Chris for you, ever the chessmaster. Great potrayal of him, and wonderfully written.

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pride_of_erin August 5 2017, 17:50:32 UTC
Thank you very much!

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shabby86 July 12 2017, 22:31:48 UTC
Nice work. Chris should know by now he's too in love with Toby to escape his feelings.

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pride_of_erin August 5 2017, 17:51:39 UTC
Very true. Thanks for the feedback!

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cmk418 July 12 2017, 23:48:14 UTC
You've portrayed Chris at his wonderfully manipulative best and Beecher's frustration with his antics is practically tangible. Some nice foreshadowing in here for the end of the series too. Well done!

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pride_of_erin August 5 2017, 17:53:25 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad it worked for you.

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lisacali July 15 2017, 17:34:16 UTC
Wonderful scene! Great voices for both of them, good job!

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pride_of_erin August 5 2017, 17:54:39 UTC
Thank you very much! Sorry for the late reply :-)

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vanillalime July 19 2017, 20:58:23 UTC
Oh, this was great! What an interesting missing scene. Now that I think about it, it's odd that we never saw Chris really tempted by drugs in Oz, since we know he's a recovering addict. This story fills in that gap nicely.

I love how you wrote high!Chris--his internal voice battling his external one, and how he's having trouble distinguishing what's real and what might be imagined. Love the hint of humor throughout the piece, too.

And I think I squeed a bit when they both reverted back to calling each other by their first names. I'm such a sucker for that. :-)

This was a great interpretation of the prompts! Thanks for writing it!

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pride_of_erin August 5 2017, 17:59:48 UTC
Oh, thank you for such lovely feedback! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Sorry for replying so late, and thank you for running the challenge.

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