Oziversary Post, quote: "The routine, man, the routine'll kill you."

Jul 12, 2017 19:42

Title: The Routine
Author: lisacali
Prompt: "The routine, man, the routine'll kill you."
Summary: The routine of Oz, as explained by Hill and Poet.

The Routine

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cmk418 July 13 2017, 03:22:27 UTC
Totally Oz-some. You have their voices down - I could hear both of them so clearly as I read this.

I liked how you came back to the bells in Poet's section. It tied it all together nicely. And your use of the quote was just perfect.

Well done!

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lisacali July 15 2017, 17:12:30 UTC
Thank you! I was very hesitant to try to write in Poet's style, but it was fun, no matter how close I got!

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mazephoenix July 13 2017, 15:56:49 UTC
That's great.

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lisacali July 15 2017, 17:11:15 UTC
Thanks so much!

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shabby86 July 14 2017, 06:51:27 UTC
This is perfect!

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lisacali July 15 2017, 17:10:54 UTC
I appreciate, thank you!

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vanillalime July 20 2017, 15:30:17 UTC
Wow, wow, WOW. This was amazing. Your Hill voice at the beginning was spot-on, but then your Poet section blew me away. Such great writing! I'd swear it was the work of muMs himself. I absolutely loved it.

Thanks so much for writing!

(And now I'm reminded of your great take from a couple of years ago on the song Summer Lovin' from Grease. I'm off to re-read that... :D)

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lisacali November 5 2017, 21:51:19 UTC
I can't apologize enough for the lateness of this reply. I just kind of dropped off the edge of the lj universe for awhile. Thank you so much for these comments (and the others.) I actually had a great time writing this and I'm so pleased you enjoyed the Poet section. I loved his poems so much!

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trillingstar July 24 2017, 04:22:34 UTC
Wow, this is really great. Your character voices are wonderful and I especially liked Poet's section, just fantastic. Well done.

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lisacali November 5 2017, 21:52:32 UTC
Thank you very much...four months later! So sorry for that, I do appreciate your comments!

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