That really was just wonderful. There was no need for you to slap on the melodrama, i loved the subtle underplay of emotions, and especially your description of their first encounter in the airport.
Very nice and quirky and understated. And, um, if you wanted to, y'know, write more of it, that would be ok too. Not that it's not complete on its own.
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