Eeeeeeexxscellent! Oh, the mid-90s obsession about family values, often trumpeted by people who ended up being in situations like this one... hehe! Peter's jealousy feels perfectly real. Great job! :D
Srsly, that was the lamest part of the 90s by far. Really, I don't think that rap music / the underinvolvement of Gen X in civic life / Marilyn Manson / whatever your own particular bogeyman was really caused you to cheat on your wife while prosecuting Clinton / go to the same high-end whores in DC that everyone else was / hit on teenage boys....
Y'know, that's make a really interesting AU - what if Nathan stopped the bomb, got better in time to take his Congress position and not lose Heidi, was still fucking Peter blind every chance he could, and then got found out? Hmm. I smell a leaked sex tape... ;D
(edited 'cause I say "seriously" too much, srsly...)
That idea's taking me back to my West Wing days. I did a couple about Josh and Sam being found out. Hmm.... may have to drag them out of the closet so to speak.
Whee! A perfectly mischevious Peter. And jealous too!
Liked this: Goddamit, Peter thought. I’m your brother, for chrissakes. That’s our look. You haven’t said a word to me all night, and now you’re all over this creep like he’s your new best friend.
And this too: “I know what you were getting,” Peter snapped. “Problem is, I haven’t been getting any at all.
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Wonderful!
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Nathan can be forgiven tho, since we all get so much out of his 'values' lol.
Thanks for reading and your kind words!
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Y'know, that's make a really interesting AU - what if Nathan stopped the bomb, got better in time to take his Congress position and not lose Heidi, was still fucking Peter blind every chance he could, and then got found out? Hmm. I smell a leaked sex tape... ;D
(edited 'cause I say "seriously" too much, srsly...)
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Hmm.... may have to drag them out of the closet so to speak.
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Liked this: Goddamit, Peter thought. I’m your brother, for chrissakes. That’s our look. You haven’t said a word to me all night, and now you’re all over this creep like he’s your new best friend.
And this too: “I know what you were getting,” Peter snapped. “Problem is, I haven’t been getting any at all.
Well done!
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“Well, you’re not giving me money,” Nathan replied flippantly. “Offer me 50 grand.”
is definitely one of my favourite lines.
Please keep writing!
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