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[p1aid]

This is a poem I wrote last night. I`m posting it because it means a lot to me right now. You all can try and pick it apart and tell me how poorly written it is. But to me it will always have meaning. It will always be raw emotion for how I feel right now

Comments

[fading_kisses]

Makes me sad! :o| Going to mail you tonight. <3

[p1aid]

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Don`t be sad..it`s not supposed to be sad.

I`ll be waiting for the email <3

[retardated]

I wish I was "Michigan". I want someone to feel that strongly for me. It's a great piece of work. I'm soooo jealous, I want something like that to submit to my teacher for a book my school is publishing.

[p1aid]

You`re most likely the only person that wishes they were "Michigan" I don`t even think he wants to be it. :\
And don`t be jealous, you write better than I do anyways <3

[retardated]

pft, yeah okay sure i do. i do want to be michigan though. if only to be loved like that for even a moment.. -sighs- i'd die a complete person.

[p1aid]

I wish I had been his Michigan..

[tokio]

i like it. a lot.

[p1aid]

Thank you.

[irishdrummerkid]

That poem made me tear up! I love it!
<3

[p1aid]

I always make you tear up! :(

[irishdrummerkid]

awe! you do sometimes but, not NEARLY as much as you make me smile! :) <3

[p1aid]

:D
yay!