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monarchist May 31 2015, 03:13:44 UTC
AAAAAAHHHH. I loved this. The little bits and pieces are what really stood out. The changes to the drinks, the muffins as Yagyuu left...

The partial world building was great -- It would be awesome to see more. :D

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inappropuri June 16 2015, 09:16:17 UTC
Definitely more around the corner at some point \:D/ At the very least some RinZ AHAHAHA

niou shows his love through food ;_; <3 And sprinkles chocolate on Sanada's coffee orz

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quelleperedhil May 31 2015, 10:11:44 UTC
This was lovely! Well-paced and well-written. You've built a curvaceous world in not too many words.

Damn you Niou with your cute coffee and irresistible sweets, making me like androids!

It made me very happy to see that peek of AtoTez (ALSO I feel like Yagyuu needs smiley faces in his coffee now).

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inappropuri June 16 2015, 09:17:21 UTC
Such a sexy world :|

Ahahaha, I think of all my friends who ship AtoTez whenever I sneak little bits of it in c:

DEFINITELY SMILEY FACES EVERYWHERE one day

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matokilove June 1 2015, 22:54:17 UTC

Aaaaah this was really cool with all the world building and robots *-----* I loved all the details and the alpha in this. Niou likes dangeeeeer <3

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inappropuri June 16 2015, 09:19:38 UTC
Hahaha thank you so much :D It was lots of fun to write! SanaYuki was very easy to sneak in there haha, they're very cooperative

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genicheerios June 3 2015, 16:27:02 UTC
Oh my goodness thank you so much!! <3 This is so lovely, the characters and world-building are incredible!!! I love it! <3 <3 <3

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inappropuri June 16 2015, 09:21:09 UTC
Eeee I'm glad you enjoyed it, I was super worried because it was kind of different to what you put on your sign up ;_;

<3

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arysthaeniru June 14 2015, 19:33:15 UTC
Man, you know, when I read this the first time, you had me screaming at the ending. I was totally flailing, that was a totally awesome ending and I loved the build-up of Niou and Yagyuu and robots. Of course Yukimura doesn't seem to give a shit about hiring several robots that go rogue. And the little touches with the muffins and the cofee and everything was super awesome, and I loved every part of this. D1 needs more love <3

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inappropuri June 16 2015, 09:23:51 UTC
:D Thank you Niru!! D1 definitely needs more love, I'm glad I was able to write it hahaha. (And of course Yukimura isn't worried, he has Sanada the android police man looking out for him and his shop :|)

\o

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arysthaeniru June 17 2015, 01:03:27 UTC
Yukimura's Yukimura, he'd probably terrify the robots himself LOL Butyes, Sanada is a great deterrent :D

And oops, is this entry not anon compatible? I should probably fix that >.>;;

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inappropuri June 17 2015, 02:41:21 UTC
Hahaha. Or maybe Yukimura is one himself.... DUN DUN DUN.....

Nah it is, LJ was just being difficult with letting me comment anon so I gave up ahaha. It's okay, this way I get notifications for replies!

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