It Was You for Minni!

Jun 01, 2015 08:38

Title: It Was You
Recipient: Minni
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None really??
Summary: Each time, it's a little more frustrating.
Notes: The prompt you gave inspired me, because it fit for these two so well!!

He looks cheerfully rotten, insouciant, and like he stumbled out of bed and just happened to land in Tokyo )

rating: pg-13, character: chitose, character: tachibana, fiction

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monarchist June 1 2015, 18:07:59 UTC
Ah, this was sweet. I love the underlying hints at past lives/reincarnation. It just begs to be explored more.

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ihmesusi June 1 2015, 20:05:23 UTC
Whoa, that was nice. Weird but really nice. I'm glad you got inspired by my prompt~

Now I'm going to be thinking about this and all the little details between the lines for the rest of the week. Thank you so much! ♥

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imperfekti June 1 2015, 20:39:10 UTC
I thought this was a beautiful story. I love ChitoTachi in general, and this was a very nice take on them. How intriguing that the reincarnation thing wasn't just Chitose being Chitose, but something Kippei felt as well. But it's hard to say whether it would be nicer to know more about that or to let it remain a mystery - either way, well done on leaving your readers thoughtful!

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quelleperedhil June 1 2015, 23:53:51 UTC
This is absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed your language, especially your usage of the present tense to broach reincarnation. The past is all built up in the present and it keeps the story hanging on who they are rather than who they were.

Great work! Now instead of Chitose keeping Tachibana guessing, they're both keeping us guessing. XD

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matokilove June 9 2015, 01:27:34 UTC

I really liked this! I love the vague backstories and i'd looooveeee to learn about each time they met before. Past lives - reborn stories are just fvjsbfbjdhdjsjd to me

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