Green Gloop Do Not Good Aliens Make for Kate!

[arysthaeniru]

Title: Green Gloop Do Not Good Aliens Make
Recipient: Kate / fayth-flame
Rating: PG-13
Summary: He is never letting Momo-senpai recommend videogames again.
Notes: Ryoma-muse was being a pain in the neck for this, but I hope that you like this anyway! It isn’t quite what you specified, but I hope it’s satisfactory.

Comments

[matokilove]

Oh ny gosh this was so exciting! All the actions and aliens and everything!! The ending was suuuper cute, i really loved it! There should be more RyoSaku in the world or outer space :')

[arysthaeniru]

I am so glad I've converted you to RyoSaku shipping xD Even if I doubt you'll write it. I enjoyed myself tremendously with this and cute ending are my total faves to do <3 Ryoma is just an embarrassed brat, at heart.

[fayth_flame]

This was super cute~

I thought the idea was great and it was funny seeing Ryoma realize the weird logic of the game and his own life all together. I loved the inclusion of a bunch of the girls. The image of green gloopy aliens like evil Maple Story slimes was funny too. And wee for random video game universes and tropes.

I was really wanting more in the end. Hope Ryoma goes to eat those cookies! The references to everyone and what happened to them vaguely in the time that's passed was fun and subtle. Hopefully Ryoma doesn't take his Sakuno for granted anymore~ ^^

Thanks for much for indulging my Tenigirl love~!

[arysthaeniru]

I am so glad you enjoyed <3 Ryoma is a funny character to write, because he's simultaneously engaged in his world, as well as a bystander watching everyone, so it's always fun to write him commenting on how weird his life is.

The moment I saw the prompt TENIGIRLS I knew that I was going to want to write a lot of them in, since I absolutely adore the girls in this verse and giving them depth is one of the best things to do, so I'm glad I got to write this for you!

And yes, I think he will take her up on those cookies~

[fayth_flame]

Yeah I enjoyed that a lot. And I'm so glad! I was afraid I'd scare people off with that, haha. They so need more attention and I loved the depth you gave them. I really wanted to see more and hear about their individual stories in and outside of the gameverse. And good boy you go eat those cookies Ryoma and try not to shrug off when a sweet girl says she loves you. ;P

I have two little critiques if you don't mind though~ First is that you kind of shifted from past to present tense a lot and that got a little confusing sometimes. So maybe double check that next time. And second is that Miyuki is actually from Kyushuu, not Osaka~