I Feel Fine (Part 2) For Tessa!
Title: I Feel Fine
Recipient: Tessa / chouta_angel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some liberties with geography.
Summary: Seven years later, eight boys from Hyoutei travel cross country in an RV; it's the end of the world as we know it.
Notes: While writing this, I listened to the Zac Brown Band's You Get What You Give album on repeat. Some of it slithered on in, and ( Read more... )
Recipient: Tessa / chouta_angel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Some liberties with geography.
Summary: Seven years later, eight boys from Hyoutei travel cross country in an RV; it's the end of the world as we know it.
Notes: While writing this, I listened to the Zac Brown Band's You Get What You Give album on repeat. Some of it slithered on in, and ( Read more... )
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Gakuto took one look at the 1980s RV covered in twigs and cracked up. “Oh fucking shit, you can’t be serious. This isn’t going to work. Atobe is gonna die a virgin before Jirou even has a chance and your boyfriend will hate you for shoving him and us into a death trap, fuckwit.”
100% Gakuto. This was the first thing to send me into a coughing fit. Gakuto's confidence in this plan is great.
“Did you let his uneven face get to you?” Shishido narrowed his eyes with judgment.
“Hey! Symmetry is very important to me!”
“...I really hoped you had been joking about that,” he screwed up his face and set his eyes back on the road.
Oh Shishido, you should know that you never joke about symmetry with Taki. It's not a joke.
All but howling, Gakuto wiped his eyes and said, “Oh Hiyoshi, you sexy thing! Won’t you be my wife ( ... )
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No, symmetry is not a joke, never a joke to Taki who can take a man's measurements in a single glance. :x
:D I had lots of fun writing it. Poor Hiyoshi ends up the butt of everything, but they love him so.
I agree that those things are a big part of what love is. A critical part of sharing someone's life is enjoying (at best and tolerating at worst) their eccentricities too. That's a big part of friendship too. Hyoutei's madness meshes well together.
IM SORRY! At his low Atobe will always seek out Kabaji. He misses him so, but at the same time, it's good for him to try and let other people in just a little. BFF kabaji will always be a huge part of Atobe; he has an international company and will see him again real soon!!
Thank you for reading :)
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Als this
“Kabaji...don’t tell anyone.”
“Usu,” Oshitari replied.
IT'S NOT OKAY BREAKING PEOPLE'S HEARTS LIKE THAT. TOTALLY NOT OKAY. I DIDN'T CRY, YOU DID
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IM SORRY!! Kabaji is Atobe's rock. While Atobe is plenty strong, he'll always reach for BFF in his time of need. :(
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And then it got sad all of a sudden :( Atttooooobeeee
I was at first outraged that Kabaji was not there, but he played just as an important role as anyone else, even without being there, and then yay, happy endings :) It was a great emotional ride :D
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Yes I was very torn about having Kabaji in there, but I felt that his absence was very important for Atobe in this story.
Also, thank you so much for running this! This is the first fic I have ever finished, and it's totally thanks to you, the exchange, and the wonderful prompts. :)
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Shishido with an RV is just... oddly appropriate and I love your Oshitari to pieces.
Jirou and Atobe were absolutely adorable. Gakuto was his snarky self and the combo of Taki & Hiyoshi... pretty sure Hiyoshi was my spirit avatar in this fic and Taki was lovely.
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I could never forget about Kabaji! His absence was very intentional. Kabaji, the greatest BFF anyone could ask for, decided not to go because, well, BFF knows best. After locking himself away in England and working himself to the bone, Atobe needed a kick out of the Kabaji safety nest for a short time (as if anyone could ever separate them for long).
Thank you for reading!! As always, Oshitari takes over everything. You'd make a cute Hiyoshi :D poor Piyo gets so tormented tho
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