Fic: Koinonia - Part Six

[pabwecg]

Title: Koinonia
Author: PABWECG (aka Patricia)
Beta: msLUREdin
Artist: sripley
Rating: Up to NC-17
Word Count: 58,071

Comments

[shar_jere]

So I took more notes while reading LOL.I think it's in order.:( Reid is finally in love and he can't have the man of his dreams...for now.oh really Reid would be working for Bob that's some interesting and welcoming news.would you think I was mean if I said I am glad Luke's putting some distance between him and Noah.ha Luke forgot to meet with his wedding planner it's a sign Luke."Luke smiled genuinely at him,feeling the gap close a little bit".key word "a little bit".Reid this,Reid that I can see the wheels spinning in Noah's head. "Well there's no reason to be jealous,since I'm never going to see him again...another sign Luke.well Luke admitted that he kiss Reid and Noah's now in denial or he's just stupid.so Noah just because scarf boy isn't an issue for you it doesn't mean that's the same for Luke because Reid's effing coming to town.

[pabwecg]

Yeah, it takes Luke a little time to trust what he's feeling...he;'ll get there...and Reid's arrival will certainly help that!

[pabwecg]

Thank you <3

Yeah, I always thought of Noah as someone who had a lot of issues and didn't love Luke nearly enough, which doesn't exactly make him a complete douche in my book, simply immature and totally wrong for Luke.

(Two more are up.)

:D

[ganeshalemming]

This story comes from a place of genuine emotional maturity. It's so much more interesting to see Noah and the Nuke relationship described as loving and worthwhile. That makes Luke's feelings and choices more difficult, complicated and real. I'm loving this and it's a breath of fresh air.

[pabwecg]

Thank you! And thank you for stopping by to comment along the way. I absolutely love reading people's thoughts about the little things as they go.

[pabwecg]

Yes, I tend to lean in the direction of the Holden I love.

While I used to love Nuke (before LuRe became an option) I never really liked Noah that much - and mostly because he simply didn't love Luke enough. So yeah, I can relate.

I actually liked Mason at first, and then he became a jerk and I didn't.

Yeah, Reid thinks he can run away at this point, distract himself. Little does he know he is going straight from the frying pan into the fire.

[marsabi]

I like how they are both struggling in a very real way in this chapter.

[pabwecg]

Thanks! So glad it seems real.