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Fic: Koinonia - Part Eleven

Oct 26, 2011 17:33

Title: Koinonia
Author: PABWECG (aka Patricia)
Beta: msLUREdin
Artist: sripley
Rating: Up to NC-17
Word Count: 58,071

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pabwecg November 10 2011, 13:11:40 UTC

tldreamer November 13 2011, 04:03:10 UTC

Thud!

pabwecg November 16 2011, 19:52:35 UTC

:D :D :D

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pabwecg November 16 2011, 19:53:07 UTC

So glad you think so!

drunkyluke November 24 2011, 02:41:35 UTC

And they both knew that there really was no taker, no receiver. That Luke was giving as he received, and that Reid was receiving as he gave. That as Luke allowed Reid to take him, he was receiving so much, and that Reid, as he took, was also relinquishing power, giving himself over to the love and desire he felt for Luke.

that, that right there is what it's all about. this was just perfect. you executed it so well. the wariness that they were both feeling. the want, the need, the love. what a beautiful, beautiful chapter.

pabwecg February 12 2012, 19:47:47 UTC

Thank you so much! I always felt like Luke and Reid were in a relationship of equals. They each had different strengths and weaknesses, but put them together and it was a puzzle that fit perfectly together. And even though we never got to see it, I'm sure that it would have felt this way in the bedroom...the giving and the receiving.