TH fic "A Troubled Masseur" 1/2 (Tom/Bill, explicit)

[paceus]

This is the first part of a sequel to my explicit twincest fic A Massage Master. Written for Smut Saturday!

A Troubled Masseur

Summary: Tom finds out that giving your little brother a prostate massage may result in morally questionable situations.

Thanks to steinsgrrl for the beta! And helkamaria for useful comments and encouragement, as well!

Comments

[tearose99]

oh wow that was amazing! Poor naive Tom didn't have a clue what he was getting into :) I really hope there is a 3rd part!

[paceus]

Thank you! :) I think it's fair to say that Tom didn't have any idea what would happen. But that's all right because Bill likes him even though he's slow. *g*

There will absolutely be a third part! I'm not sure when but there will be. :)

[fyredancer]

I love this fic so much I came over here to flail some more. <3 He'd just promised to stroke Bill inside his ass until Bill came, and Bill didn't think it was problematic at all. Bill had asked for it! Poor protective Tom, so distraught over all he's learned - and the fact he feels responsible for making Bill want it!

This was absolutely beautiful: Bill was concentrating on Tom's finger that was, now that Tom thought about it, caressing the glossy magazine page slowly and lovingly. This dawned on Tom right when he was looking at Bill and Bill licked his lips, and then there was a consecutive train wreck of Tom's breath catching at the sight of the soft tip of Bill's tongue, and Bill shifting his hips and letting his legs fall open a little, and then Tom was suddenly rock hard and faltering. - Not a word exchanged between them and yet they're both so, so turned on. And I'm not sure Tom realizes that Bill IS, and moreover Bill may be a bit more in tune with what he's feeling than Tom. <3

[paceus]

Your icon is so lovely, and also distracting me from answering your comment...

I'm so happy you like my story! :D Tom does feel distraught and confused and guilty, poor thing. Protectiveness combined with sexual feelings toward your brother isn't easy!

I'm thrilled by your speculation, hee. It's so much fun to read about what you think is going on in Bill's head! Thanks for lovely comments, both of them!

[aatln]

Poor Tom. I figured he's have some stress reliever this chapter, but I guess the next chapter???

Great fic!!

[paceus]

Thanks! :) I thought he'd find some relief in this chapter too, but apparently not. He's so stubborn. *g* Stress is bad for your heart, Tom! Embrace twincest Um, anyway... :D

[itzerikaaa]

i LOVE that you're giving us more of this story♥

[paceus]

It makes me very happy that the readers want more! :) Thanks!