Shoebox of Memories

Apr 03, 2005 14:38

Under the water damaged dresser in my room(passed on to me from my grandfather) I found a box filled with mementos from my childhood. Strange that I would be interested in such a thing now when I used to curse them as ties to the foolish immaturity of my youth(which I am still very much in). I was able to smile at the comedic value a square block ( Read more... )

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delphicduck April 13 2005, 08:36:58 UTC
Please don't start talking about the "moments of cold pre-dawn".

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pensee5 April 14 2005, 21:52:48 UTC
A good nostalgic piece, and a deceptively difficult one at that. I think you did a really good job with the descriptions and not lapsing into syrupy sentamentality. I really did enjoy reading it - its too short though, needs more substance too it than two paragraphs, it sounds almost like a introduction to something greater (perhaps broaden your scope? don't be afraid to commit to an essay ( ... )

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