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'til death (taohun, nc-17, 4200w)

Jul 12, 2013 22:27

Title: ‘Til Death
Author: hopeandmemory
Pairing: Sehun/Tao
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4200
Summary: Sehun and Tao get married. This is what happens on the wedding night.
Disclaimer: I made it all up.

( Sehun's still trying to blink the flash out of his eyes and brush the confetti out of his hair… )

fic: exo, pairing: taohun, rating: nc17

Comments 28

cairistiona July 12 2013, 15:44:22 UTC

yessssssssssss

i like this very much yesssssssss

hopeandmemory July 13 2013, 01:04:25 UTC

:D

thanks for reading~

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hopeandmemory July 13 2013, 01:04:49 UTC

CRIES THAT'S SO NICE OF YOU ;A; thank you for reading and commenting ♥

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hopeandmemory July 13 2013, 01:08:45 UTC

;~~~~~; hearing that i've been recced is so weird and cool omg

it's all happy camp's fault. the carrying around, HOLDING HANDS IN THE GODDAMN AIRPORT, MATCHING ROMPERS, I JUST. fuckin taohun let me die D:

thank you so much for the lovely comment ;A; ♥

thatdayismine July 13 2013, 01:36:41 UTC

so as i was reading this i was also screaming at zitaos over im because i couldn't contain how many feelings this was giving me and just. HOW DID YOU WRITE SOMETHING SO INTIMATE AND WONDERFUL AND SWEET ;~~~~~; AND SEHUN CRYING BECAUSE HE GOT ALL EMOTIONALLY OVERWHELMED AND ZITAO CARRYING SEHUN BRIDAL STYLE AND TEASING HIM ABOUT HOW HE WAS GONNA DENY LIKING IT ALL NIGHT SOBS

i'm just, it was perfect and so so so sweet and zitao being so reverent and careful and wanting to take his time. IT WAS ALL PERFECT AND I AM IN SO MUCH DISTRESS BECAUSE OF THIS FIC PLEASE TAKE RESPONSIBILITY.

ZITAO SAYING HE WANTS TO MAKE LOVE TO SEHUN I BARFED TOO, SEHUNA, I BARFED TOO. AND THE ACTUAL FUCKING WAS SO HOT AND SWEET JESUS YOU ARE WONDERFUL AND THANKYOU SO MUCH FOR THIS ♥!!!! ♥♥♥!!!!!!

hopeandmemory July 13 2013, 07:02:04 UTC

i literally don't know because INTIMATE STUFF GIVES ME THE SQUICKS??? i'm so broken inside, i swear, lmfao. sehun would totally cry, after he cried on sukira i pegged him as the type to get seriously emotional over shit but try to hide it because he's embarrassed, and tao is the kind of person who cries when other people cry, lmao.

i knew it had to be ~that kind of sex~ so if i was gonna make it all romantic and shit i had to use sehun as my mouthpiece for the "this is gross ugh making love my skin is crawling" feeling i was dealing with at the time, LMFAO. cries. b r o k e n.

thank you so much for the lovely comment, i love enthusiastic responses like these. ;A; <333

yoongi July 13 2013, 14:33:53 UTC

THIS HURTS ME IN PLACES I DIDN'T KNOW COULD HURT I FEEL LIKE I'M MELTING ;_____; thank you for sharing! ♥

hopeandmemory July 14 2013, 15:01:32 UTC

I HOPE IT'S A GOOD HURT :D

you're welcome! thanks for reading and leaving a comment. :)