absence makes the heart grow fonder (krisyeol, nc-17, ~5200w)

Sep 15, 2013 02:17

Title: Absence Makes the Heart Grow Fonder
Author: hopeandmemory
Pairing: Kris/Chanyeol
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5200
Summary: Trying to maintain a relationship over Skype is the bane of Park Chanyeol’s existence.

Chanyeol’s stomach bottoms out, and for a few seconds he thinks he might cry. )

fic: exo, rating: nc17, pairing: krisyeol

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kim_ri September 15 2013, 06:55:56 UTC
liz

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kim_ri September 15 2013, 06:56:01 UTC
liz i'm

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kim_ri September 15 2013, 06:56:10 UTC
liz i'm deceased

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hopeandmemory September 15 2013, 23:04:51 UTC
readies the defibrillator

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g_odalisque13 September 15 2013, 12:58:37 UTC
this is was so freaking cute
i loved their banter before, during, and after sex lmao
“You,” he says, “are underestimating how hot it is when you come so hard it makes your eyes water.”
i didn't know how much i wanted this until i read it. akjnjdsg.
i haven't read good krisyeol in a while, so this was refreshing!
loved it!! ^^

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hopeandmemory September 15 2013, 22:37:40 UTC
i've never written krisyeol before but i love their dynamic. i'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue! i'm always nervous about too much talking in sex scenes but i feel like no talking at all is weird, or at the very least boring to read so i just try to make it feel natural and humorous because i think sex is kind of funny. taking it too seriously makes it so awkward to think about, let alone write about!

thanks for the comment, and thank you for reading! :)

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paradisist September 15 2013, 13:17:57 UTC
I love how natural (and incredibly sweet) this fic is, and how fuzzy it makes me feel. Love your lj username btw! :>

<3

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hopeandmemory September 15 2013, 22:38:45 UTC
aw thanks! the username for this journal (i mean my writing journal, the one this fic is posted on) comes from the franz ferdinand song "your diary." been using it on and off around the internet since about 2005. :)

i'm glad you liked the fic, thanks for reading. :D

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indira22 September 15 2013, 13:42:17 UTC
sexy,and sweet at the same time!!
ugh perfect!!

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hopeandmemory September 15 2013, 22:39:06 UTC
thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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aitotchideto September 15 2013, 15:11:56 UTC
ugh i can totally relate this long-distance relationship thing i haven't seen my boyfriend outside of my laptop screen in almost half a year since he's away for work and it's just ugh this story exactly chanyeol i feel you man.

this is really sweet though, thank you for sharing :)

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hopeandmemory September 15 2013, 22:41:21 UTC
i've never been in a long-distance relationship, but i recently returned home from a year abroad (i was in south korea, actually) and although it was only my family i was staying in contact with via skype, it still sucks to be away from anyone you care about for an extended period of time. i'm glad this story resonated with you, but i'm sorry you're in that situation, too. :( i hope you're able to see each other again soon! <3

thanks for reading and commenting, i really appreciate it. :)

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