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ready on your belly (if you wanna have fun) (fem!jongin/chanyeol, ~4000w, nc-17)

Jan 04, 2014 21:06

Title: Ready on Your Belly (If You Wanna Have Fun)
Author: hopeandmemory
Pairing: Het!KaiYeol (fem!Jongin)
Rating: NC-17 (seriously)
Word Count: ~4000
Summary: Jongin really (really) likes Chanyeol’s ass.
Warnings: moderate kink, I guess? Rimming, pegging, sex toys.

( Jongin walks into their bedroom just in time to catch Chanyeol stepping out of the master bathroom, a towel around his waist and drops of water crawling down his neck and onto his chest. )

length: oneshot, fic: exo, pairing: kaiyeol, rating: nc17

Comments 36

bicheul January 5 2014, 02:36:00 UTC

lord have
mercy
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ok

hopeandmemory January 5 2014, 03:06:05 UTC

i'm so embarrassed after writing this i dont even know whether to crosspost it because??? WOW?????????????

yours was so cute and funny im gonna go read it again :c

charliebnim January 5 2014, 03:52:53 UTC

I LOVED IT!!! BUT I WAS GONNA ASK IF YOU HAD EXPERIENCE ON IT BECAUSE THIS LOOKS SO FUCKING REAL OMFG !!!!!! <3 JESUS

hopeandmemory January 5 2014, 04:20:27 UTC

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA oh my god no, definitely not. i just wrote this because my friend brought up the idea on twitter and i was bored! haha. i'm glad you enjoyed it, though!

kaiyeols January 5 2014, 04:15:56 UTC

whoa whoa whoa i have to admit that it was way better than i expected omg?
first of all i really liked kaiyeol's interaction as a couple here, i mean i love how open to each other jongin and chanyeol are and how comfortably they talk about sex, and how much jongin cares about letting chanyeol know exactly what she wants to do and how much she cares about his consent.
i also love how fun and nice and comfortable you made the whole thing, with chanyeol reactions and jongin being generally amused and definitely aroused by it. it felt real and really nice to read!
thank you for sharing! this is very very important and hope you write more about this verse because i really loved it~

hopeandmemory January 5 2014, 04:28:29 UTC

i admit i was a little nervous seeing this username in my inbox because i was afraid it would disappoint!! haha. i'm glad you liked it - thank you for the comments on characterization. at times i wasn't sure they had much, because i was so focused on what they were doing, but i'm glad those little things came out. (especially about the consent... particularly because it was such a new experience for chanyeol.)

thank you for the lovely comments! i really appreciate it. ;~~; i'm not sure i will write more but i'm working on some other stuff (other ships etc) so keep your eyes peeled~~ :)

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hopeandmemory January 5 2014, 04:30:05 UTC

IT'S THE FIRST ONE I'VE WRITTEN AND I JUST

it was scary man

(i'm not allowed to write anything besides baekfest until the 15th screams at myself and dives into google drive)

i'm glad you liked it ;~~; ty for reading!

admortems January 5 2014, 05:04:24 UTC

OUTTA MY WAY BITCHES IM GONNA READ THE SHIT OUT OF THIS

admortems January 5 2014, 06:07:09 UTC

[SHRILL SHRIEKING]

WHY IS EVERYONE SO GOOD TO ME YOU ARE THE BEST???

+100000000 for including rimming god fuck

hopeandmemory January 5 2014, 07:16:44 UTC

BECAUSE YOU HAVE GOOD IDEAS <333

dude would you believe i haven't ever written a rimming fic... i almost included it in taohun wedding fic but i didn't wanna go ass to mouth (AS YOU CAN SEE FROM THE GRATUITOUS "OOP GOTTA LISTERINE"), lmfao. I DO THE THING FOR YOU OK <3

admortems January 5 2014, 07:58:20 UTC

personally if /MY/ mouth ever came in contact w/chanyeols ass u can rest assured that id never brush my teeth again LMFAO FUCK THATS SO GROOSS

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