killing time (can i kill it with you?) (jundae, nc17, 10.5k)
Title: killing time (can i kill it with you?)
Author: hopeandmemory
Pairing: Jongdae/Junmyeon
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 10,500
Summary: Jongdae goes to Martha's Vineyard to visit Junmyeon for a couple weeks of summer vacation.
( Jongdae fiddles with the cuff of his sweatshirt as he leans against the ferry’s railing, watching the coastline of the Vineyard come into clearer view. )
Author: hopeandmemory
Pairing: Jongdae/Junmyeon
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 10,500
Summary: Jongdae goes to Martha's Vineyard to visit Junmyeon for a couple weeks of summer vacation.
( Jongdae fiddles with the cuff of his sweatshirt as he leans against the ferry’s railing, watching the coastline of the Vineyard come into clearer view. )
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All the dialogue here felt very... genuine? idk how to describe it, but the flows of conversations and interactions so natural. Even I hadn't read Out of My League, I was able to get a pretty good grasp on the characters. (Although I immediately went and read it after reading this through once). The story on the whole felt very real, and I think the post-grad anxiety was portrayed very well.
So basically, your ' slice-of-life, flimsy-excuse-for-a-bonefest' is spectacular, and I will probably read it like 10 more times because there isn't enough suchen in the world.
thank you for writing!
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junmyeon just seems like someone who would be awkwardly caring and hella nervous. i feel like we'd understand each other really well, lmfao. AND HE'S SO HANDSOME SOMETIMES??? i don't normally have many suho feels but damn sometimes not-oppa looks hotttttttttthank you so much for the comment about the dialogue! i spend a lot of time reading and re-reading it to make sure it sounds natural and like something a human would actually say, lmao. i'm glad that it was easy for you to get a read on the characters, even without reading OOML - that kind of feedback means a lot to me, i truly appreciate it. :3 ( ... )
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seriously this was so cute and hot and funny it was everything good in one fic. jongdae was so precious loving to cuddle in bed skdjsksjaosjuauaj I rly loved it idek what to comment and comment properly but here have my tears and a piece of my heart, take it as a gift.
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kim jongdae is the most precious, he's a complete cuddlemonster and i loVE HIM ;~~~~~;
takes your heart very carefully <3 thank you for reading!!
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So yeah thnk youuuuu
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thank you so much for the kind words, i'm so happy you liked this! :)
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You wrote more in this AU~~~ my otp.. beautiful porn.. tears of blood.. happy blood tears though...(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ i'm having a sparkle-throwing party and it's just me throwing glitter at my laptop with a tab open to this fic. I love you. I love your writing. i love this au. I am so happy right now. I can't even leave a good comment but this is so good. Like. So good. fav Suchen. You're my fav.
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this comment is just fine! i love spazzy replies. :3 thank you so much for reading and commenting, i love hearing what people are thinking!!
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