Oneshot - Once in a Blue Moon

Aug 03, 2009 17:53

Title: Once in a Blue Moon
Pairing: Yoochun/Jaejoong
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance
3,670 words.
Warning: No capitals because I was lazy. :| Sorry.
A/N: I spent months on this, and now it's finally finished. \o/ Yay! Dedicated to everyone who I love with all my heart. mikiraa and savedby_music especially because you both rock a lot ( Read more... )

fandom: dbsk, length: oneshot, pairing: yoochun/jaejoong

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mitzuki_chan August 4 2009, 04:41:15 UTC
THIS. MINE.

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mitzuki_chan August 4 2009, 05:02:50 UTC
ahhh, i'm supposed to be doing chem right now, but psht who cares, really :|

BUT.

THIS.

YOU.

GUH.

definitely not a waste of five months :'D

i loved chun's train of thought in the beginning, where he wonders what will happen if he just disappeared and if it will affect the world in any way. it makes me think of that saying, if a tree falls over in the forest and there's no one around to hear it, then has it made a sound? if nobody in the world knows about a person's existence, then does that person exist? wtf, why am i even discussing this here -shot-

and asldkfsldfk your music = gahhhh ♥
it's so relaxing to listen to while reading and i can only imagine it must be heaven to write to. tell meh where you get ittttt -puppy eyes-
+ play this song for me next we come over? :D

quotebacks another day, maybe, chem is still calling my name ;_______;
but, i'm super happy to tell you that this piece is beautiful and you're getting so much better like eeeeeeeee ♥

ok, now back to chem :'(
i will see you tomorrow bb
love you ♥

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cant_stop02 August 5 2009, 01:12:54 UTC
why are you the most amazing person ever. ;; ♥

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mitzuki_chan August 7 2009, 05:22:39 UTC
+ aldkjflkdf i spent around an hour scrounging around google for the mp3 of this song, not realizing there was a dl link at the top of your entry -fails-

obviously, i need to learn to read :(

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mikiraa August 5 2009, 02:45:46 UTC
I TOTALLY TAKE BACK WHAT I SAID TO YOU ON MSN.
i have tears streaming down my face right now T_T omg i feel like such an emo.

i love chun's thoughts at the beginning. i just feel that i could sometimes (please don't call me an emo for this D:) relate to that. like the al;skdjla;skdj frustration of "wtf is the point of my life."

OKAY anyway. moving away from that.

ah i don't know. i love everything about this fic. how jae becomes chun's inspiration, how they fall in love.. OH IT'S JUST SO TOUCHING AND OMG I LOVE ITTTT <3 <3 (sorry i'm a total sucker for cheesy lovey dovey stuff)

sooo. the point of this comment was > MY LOVE FOR YOU AND I LOVE THIS. <3 <3

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cant_stop02 August 5 2009, 03:10:10 UTC
DDDDD: stop crying. it makes me feel horrible. stop it.

aww thanks. i'm just. really happy you like it. :( really really. ♥

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nakahara02 August 5 2009, 02:51:06 UTC
this is beautiful.. eventhough everything is in lower case, but this is really written beautifully. I read it alittle too hasty so i'll be reading again. but you got me in tears..

thanks for such a nice story(:

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cant_stop02 August 5 2009, 03:12:37 UTC
thank you. ♥ -wipes away tears- :)

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anonymous August 5 2009, 03:27:07 UTC
omgggg
its so nice! :)
really beautiful even though its sad
it was meant to be that they meet even though his 'life' was over
-VL

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cant_stop02 August 5 2009, 03:40:37 UTC
aww, thanks vivi. ♥ happy you liked!

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coffeemilk23 August 5 2009, 03:54:40 UTC
I. WILL BE BACK TO COMMENT ON THIS FIC.

I'LL BE BACK.

SKDJAFHLSKAJDKLSAJDKSALD;LSAKDLSADL;SAK; ♥

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cant_stop02 August 5 2009, 04:14:39 UTC
lol. :') ♥

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coffeemilk23 August 5 2009, 21:42:47 UTC
OHKAY. HI THAR. :D TIME FOR QUOTE-BACKS CUZ YOU LOVE 'EM.

racing outlines of faraway stars and the faded white blur of a moon that once hung proudly on the smooth velvet.

a 'park yoochun' that lived in the nearly broken-down house on that quiet neighborhood in a town that nobody's heard the name of.

maybe no one would ask about you at all and you would be forgotten forever, kind of like you never existed. would merely be a figment of the imagination, a song no one knows the words to, a memory nobody remembers.

then he smiles and the world stops spinning, sands of time pausing midway. your breath holds, and your heart skips a few beats.

none of the notes seem to fit together- like a wrong puzzle piece, you just have to pick another and try again.

rain drums against the window pane steadily in a symphony, charging and powerful, and you close your eyes to find the melody, to hear the music it sings.

“i- uhh… er… you umbrella?” you stutter. "i mean, d-do you need an umbrella?" you hand the handle to him awkwardly, trying a smile.

... )

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cant_stop02 August 6 2009, 02:22:19 UTC
you're crazy.

... yeah. you're just. really crazy.

:'( i love you so much. ♥ x forever. /sobs.

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