It's soooo nice to come online and read lovely JaeChun, and this was amazing. It was so sweet and touching, and I absolutely loved every single scene with HoSuMin, because it's so easy to forget about that emotional glue that holds the JaeChun together just as much as the soulmates do.
I only really had one problem with it, and that was how quickly Yoochun came around to Jaejoong after Jaejoong disappeared for months. It just didn't seem natural, and the obvious fact that Jaejoong was still keeping in touch with the others and was only really avoiding Yoochun would have at least caused some resentment, or at least hurt. Soul searching is all well and good, but I think it would have been good for Jaejoong to see how selfish that can be, with no warning or explanation, you know? Yoochun's quick forgiveness just made it very difficult to believe.
Other than that, though, I really enjoyed it, and it reminded me of how much I miss JaeChun every day I'm gone. XD
ahh, i see what you mean. i guess it didn't really occur to us (since we were in such a hurry to finish), but you're right. thanks for pointing that out. :)
and thank you thank you for taking the time to read it! that means a lot!
OH MY GOD. WHAT THE HELL WITH THE LACK OF COMMENTS. THE FIC WAS WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL, WARM, CALM. AND EVERYTHING. THE FLOW IS NOT HICCUPING, THE PLACES YOU PICKED, THE THINGS YOU EMPHASIZED. ITS EVERYTHING. THIS IS REALLY CLOSE TO PERFECT. ITS OVERWHELMING. ITS NOT ENTIRELY CLICHE. THE THINGS THAT I PREDICTED CAME OUT CORRECT BUT NOT THE WAY I THOUGHT. THERES SOME TWIST. AND OH MY GOD. I JUST LOVE THIS, OKAY? OKAY.
THANK YOU. AND HELLO. DO YOU REMEMBER ME? HAHAHAAH. OKAY, MAYBE NOT.
:'D :'D thank you thank you thank you ♥ i'm super glad you liked it so much, that means a lot! because this thing took us forever to write and it was so so frustrating but ahhh, thank you, again. :D :D
and LOL of COURSE i remember you, you commented on like, all my jaechun LOLOL. ahh you are too kind to me~ ♥
ugh hi, um, utterly late comment, but i just read this on secretgame and goodness it was amazing (and it's jaechun!!!) i had to find a place where i could flail and profess my undying love for the author(s) but the fic was...breathtaking. i found myself in tears near the end, because i'm such a sucker for happy endings ;~; i especially love the way you wrote yoochun - he was very believable and so human - i could see a bit of myself in him, at times (which makes his character altogether even more real) and i love your jaejoong too - flighty and spontaneous. yunho was so very kind (ugh if only i had a friend like him) and gosh, the way you captured their ot5 dynamics made the fic altogether even more gorgeous! ;~; i love how everything was weaved together, and yoochun's constant search (in life, and in his heart) and just - the whole plot painted a very dreamy picture for me. ah really, thank you so much! ( i want to flail to the other author too but i'm not sure where i can do that, so hahah ) it was a very, very, very nice read, and
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firstly, thank you for all your wonderful comments! i was gushing the entire way through, you're too kind :') but i'm really glad you liked it! it's a really long read i know, but i'm so happy you read it despite that :)
at first the entire fic was just gonna be strictly jaechun! it was actually mitzuki_chan that pushed for ot5 and i eventually gave in. i'm really glad it happened though, 'cause it gave way for a deeper story :) she was the mastermind behind a lot of the fantastic imagery! she's an amazing writer, honestly! i just steered the fic where i wanted it to go lol! feel free to pm her or something, i'm not sure if she has it turned off or anything though :x
omg i'm a sucker for quote backs haha, thank you so much ;_; i'm reaaaally happy you enjoyed this! and thank you for such a great comment! ♥
(ugh i just read my comment above. oh gosh i have such a tendency to flail everywhere ;__;) but um - i just read it again and omg. aslfjhdlghlskgh. it was as perfect and as beautiful as the first time i did. so - really, thank you ;___; i cried again at the end when jaejoong came back because it was just so right, and so happy and just - the best ending ever.
so thank you again, for writing this! if it's okay i'll probably come back every time i reread this and flail all over ;;;;;; ♥
;AAAA; um thank you so much, again LOL. please please please feel free to reread this and flail! your flailing is welcomed whenever! :'DDD (also i am loving your jaechun icons. nom ♥)
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I only really had one problem with it, and that was how quickly Yoochun came around to Jaejoong after Jaejoong disappeared for months. It just didn't seem natural, and the obvious fact that Jaejoong was still keeping in touch with the others and was only really avoiding Yoochun would have at least caused some resentment, or at least hurt. Soul searching is all well and good, but I think it would have been good for Jaejoong to see how selfish that can be, with no warning or explanation, you know? Yoochun's quick forgiveness just made it very difficult to believe.
Other than that, though, I really enjoyed it, and it reminded me of how much I miss JaeChun every day I'm gone. XD
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ahh, i see what you mean. i guess it didn't really occur to us (since we were in such a hurry to finish), but you're right. thanks for pointing that out. :)
and thank you thank you for taking the time to read it! that means a lot!
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THE FIC WAS WONDERFUL, BEAUTIFUL, WARM, CALM.
AND EVERYTHING.
THE FLOW IS NOT HICCUPING, THE PLACES YOU PICKED, THE THINGS YOU EMPHASIZED.
ITS EVERYTHING. THIS IS REALLY CLOSE TO PERFECT.
ITS OVERWHELMING. ITS NOT ENTIRELY CLICHE.
THE THINGS THAT I PREDICTED CAME OUT CORRECT BUT NOT THE WAY I THOUGHT.
THERES SOME TWIST. AND OH MY GOD. I JUST LOVE THIS, OKAY? OKAY.
THANK YOU. AND HELLO. DO YOU REMEMBER ME? HAHAHAAH.
OKAY, MAYBE NOT.
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and LOL of COURSE i remember you, you commented on like, all my jaechun LOLOL. ahh you are too kind to me~ ♥
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firstly, thank you for all your wonderful comments! i was gushing the entire way through, you're too kind :') but i'm really glad you liked it! it's a really long read i know, but i'm so happy you read it despite that :)
at first the entire fic was just gonna be strictly jaechun! it was actually mitzuki_chan that pushed for ot5 and i eventually gave in. i'm really glad it happened though, 'cause it gave way for a deeper story :) she was the mastermind behind a lot of the fantastic imagery! she's an amazing writer, honestly! i just steered the fic where i wanted it to go lol! feel free to pm her or something, i'm not sure if she has it turned off or anything though :x
omg i'm a sucker for quote backs haha, thank you so much ;_; i'm reaaaally happy you enjoyed this! and thank you for such a great comment! ♥
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but um - i just read it again and omg. aslfjhdlghlskgh. it was as perfect and as beautiful as the first time i did. so - really, thank you ;___; i cried again at the end when jaejoong came back because it was just so right, and so happy and just - the best ending ever.
so thank you again, for writing this! if it's okay i'll probably come back every time i reread this and flail all over ;;;;;; ♥
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The last line was perfect, just purely awesome :'))))))))))
<3
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