Al I cant say that makes sense because my brain is mush after this, is that I loved it. You got a way with words and I love how you describe things. I truly enjoyed reading your story ♥ *U*
YAY, I'm so glad they ended up circling round to each other and my headcanon is they will get their happy ending now that they are older and wiser lol. Really lovely job here. The characters felt very human and I liked seeing both sides of the story and how their relationship and their own issues affected both themselves and the other.
That's my headcanon too. So you can consider it canon. :P I am so glad that the characters felt so real to you, I really struggled on that front. So thank you!
This was so sad, happy too in parts but it was terrible when their relationship fell apart. Thank goodness they took the chance to make things right again.
I almost didn't click because poetry, I don't understand it and I couldn't understand how Jensen made writing poetry his life but when I read the poem he wrote, it was amazing. It made me totally understand how he could do that. I really, really liked that poem.
smile so wide it is too big for his face and fills up the now too-full world, falling off the
corners of his mouth and tangling up his feet and so he falls, falls, but he laughs still, this man, larger than life, this Runner and his dogs, yet not only a man; see the child he once was and still is, there, yes!
I love all of that but that line, his smile--*wow.*
So, just to be clear, I *very* much enjoyed this story, thank you for sharing it. :)
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emotional roller coaster and tore my heart out and then fixed it right at the end!
just wonderful!! loved this so much!!!
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I almost didn't click because poetry, I don't understand it and I couldn't understand how Jensen made writing poetry his life but when I read the poem he wrote, it was amazing. It made me totally understand how he could do that. I really, really liked that poem.
smile so wide
it is too big for his face and fills up the now too-full world, falling off the
corners of his mouth and tangling up his feet and so he falls, falls, but
he laughs still, this man, larger than life, this Runner and his dogs, yet not
only a man; see the child he once was and still is, there, yes!
I love all of that but that line, his smile--*wow.*
So, just to be clear, I *very* much enjoyed this story, thank you for sharing it. :)
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