Comments | paintingseas: ✈.001 this is a world of make believe; drabble

paintingseas

✈.001 this is a world of make believe; drabble

Mar 15, 2010 18:44

this is the world of make believe
amber/jessica; r

( amber moaned as soft lips flitted across her collarbone. her body shivered as her mind exploded into magnificent color, moaning against jessica's featherlight hair. )

❤fandom: snsd, ❤pairing: amber/jessica, !drabble, ❤fandom: f(x)

Comments 6

ex_jennchii487 March 17 2010, 05:38:27 UTC

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Wow, just wow. The details here are so stunning, so beautiful and so vivid. I had no idea that she wasn't there. Poor Amber ;~;.

I really love this pairing a whole lot, the vagueness in the smut makes it beautiful.

I think it makes it hotter, sometimes less is more.

paintingseas March 17 2010, 06:06:18 UTC

really? thank you, i'm glad i could surprise you then :D

is vagueness in smut good? thanks for reading ^^

ex_jennchii487 March 18 2010, 04:12:14 UTC

I think vagueness in smut is hot. I think sometimes its best to leave somethings to your imagination, some people get so detailed with it. Like in the physical aspect and not the breath hitching and the feelings. Sometimes I feel that things that are like this are the most beautiful smut ever.

paintingseas March 18 2010, 06:34:47 UTC

that's a very good point, thank you for your input! i have to say most of the time i agree, i like how you read into these, it really means a lot ♥

robotiques March 20 2010, 17:39:49 UTC

This was fantastic. It's amazing how even though it was a drabble, it felt like it were a full one shot. The story was told with simplicity, and I found it to be fascinating.

I have to agree about the vagueness of the smut, it leaves the reader with more to imagine, and it has a fantasy type feel. It makes it charming. ♥

paintingseas March 20 2010, 19:03:05 UTC

aw thank you so much ;~; ♥ i'm glad it can be appreciated!