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Body Aches - Oneshot (Cobb/Ariadne/Arthur)

Feb 23, 2011 13:38

Title: Body Aches
Author: skylilies
Pairing: Cobb/Ariadne/Arthur
Fandom: Inception
Word Count: 890
Genre: angst
Rating: pg-13 (profanity; violence & disturbing imagery)
Disclaimer: Don't own the characters, just my interpretations of them.

Teaser: This is what Ariadne would have dreamed: all of Paris abandoned, beautiful buildings caving in as their ( Read more... )

pairing; cobbxariadnexarthur, fandom; inception

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skylilies March 20 2011, 01:56:03 UTC

it fascinates me that everyone is taken in by this line, truly! o:

ahh, i'm not sure if my writing would flesh out quite the same way in a novel length story? i think it might lose its bite -- because part of the bite is the little punch of each tiny story, something that a longer story would have to lose in favor of a storyline that isn't too convoluted or overrun by ridiculous little scenes, haha.

i'm glad you liked it bb, and even gladder that you prompted me (: ♥

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skylilies March 20 2011, 01:53:51 UTC

haha, neither did i until i was prompted with it! (: thank you so much for commenting! ♥

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skylilies March 20 2011, 01:53:19 UTC

oh wow, thank you! and thanks for taking the time to comment (:

vinylroad February 24 2011, 20:10:56 UTC

This was absolutely fantastic. I loved your use of language and how evocative this piece was even though it was short. It felt like the world was fleshed out just enough to make it completely haunting.

I have to echo the sentiment above - this line is gorgeous: If Dom had dreams, no one would die in them. Ariadne looks like she wants to kiss him as she agrees.

I really hope you write more in this fandom.

skylilies March 20 2011, 01:52:58 UTC

i'm planning to write more in this fandom, i just haven't been quite sure what i want to write about (: there's so many gorgeous writers here who have already fleshed out so many interesting concepts!

and thank you so much for the wonderful comment, and taking the time to share it. ♥!;;

augurscourtesan February 26 2011, 08:44:06 UTC

You wrote Inception.

YOU WROTE INCEPTION!!!!!!

::Dances around the room::

::Comes back to the computer::

YOU. Wrote. INCEPTION.

::blisses at you:: &heart;

skylilies March 20 2011, 01:51:50 UTC

i wrote inception! ahaha omg thank you for being so excited about it!! ♥!