Graduation Speech

[notorious_k_e_v]

Pali Students,

I (Kevin Orbach) was chosen to give my speech at graduation, and for the most part the judges were satisfied with it's current incarnation. The topic centers on high school students that complain about it solely because it seems cool to do so. It also has the expected section urging students to take advantage and enjoy life now, and

Comments

[a_walking_lie]

I loved your thing about Sartre. I don't know how many people will get it, but I do. I like your speech a lot, you're keeping it real. Sure it is a little negative but people can relate to it instead of the blah blah blah cliche speeches there. Your speech makes it where people can think to themselves about their high school experience. I read it and I thought to myself that you were right. I honestly hated my high school years but after reading this speech, I guess there were many things to out weigh the bad.

There are a few minor things to edit, but other than that-I think you should keep it the way it is.