Comments | panaili: FIC: pull my strings just for a thrill (1/4)

panaili

FIC: pull my strings just for a thrill (1/4)

Oct 31, 2011 10:33

...wow, it's been awhile since I've posted here. :) HAVE FANFIC.

Media:: Fanfic
Title: pull my strings just for a thrill (1/4)
Rating: R
Spoilers:: Takes place after 2x16: "Original Song"
Warnings:: Kidnapping, horror, supernatural elements
Word Count: 7,000+ (this part)
Notes: In honor of Halloween, I've decided to post the first part of my ( Read more... )

glee, fandom, fanfic

Comments 14

ibonekoen October 31 2011, 20:58:56 UTC

Wow, what a start to a good, creepy tale. That bit at the end, man. I was like O_O

sun_and_rain October 31 2011, 21:50:26 UTC

Wow. I need the next chapter to this like I need air.

heystella October 31 2011, 22:29:24 UTC

YOU HAD TO END IT THERE. OH GOD.

This is great - such an atmospheric, quietly creepy tone. I'm loving it so far. :)

raokhshna October 31 2011, 22:39:46 UTC

Ughhhh, creepy. O_O Perfect for Halloween.

I hate horror stories. Hate them.

Give me more parts. Now.

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slanted_edges October 31 2011, 23:17:22 UTC

Holy shit, it is insane how good this is. Like, I can't even -- ohmigod. Excuse me while I go flail and shout somewhere for a few moments.

Okay okay, so hopefully this comment will be coherent enough for things to make sense. The tone, the pacing, the writing itself, the plot, everything is perfect. Your style immediately pulls and traps us in the world you've painted, this world that's grey and bleak and lonely with the loss of Kurt. For all intents and purposes, we are Blaine and it's incredibly hard not to feel what he's feeling in the story -- but at the same time the further the story progresses the more we, the readers, diverge from Blaine because we know that something else is going on, and it's this lovely juxtaposition of points of view that creates the total creepiness of the story. Even though we become increasingly aware of everything, Blaine doesn't. In fact, he becomes less aware and in turn less in control of his body -- and if he has less control, then we have no control at all, which makes it all the more ( ... )