What a wonderful gift you've given me here! Well written, nicely paced, all the elements I requested. I love it!
Elizabeth had become a harder woman, he thought at first, yet she also seemed to have softened, as if the sea had smoothed her around the edges like a sharp piece of glass.
This is such a perfect description of Elizabeth, the "Sea Angel".
Well done! I am very much looking forward to the second part.
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Elizabeth had become a harder woman, he thought at first, yet she also seemed to have softened, as if the sea had smoothed her around the edges like a sharp piece of glass.
This is such a perfect description of Elizabeth, the "Sea Angel".
Well done! I am very much looking forward to the second part.
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