Comments | pandapremium: Draco/Ginny Fic and HYD SPOILERS

pandapremium

Draco/Ginny Fic and HYD SPOILERS

Mar 30, 2007 14:01

Hi, well I finally watched the rest of HYD2 last week and actually really liked it. I love how lovey-dovey Domyougi is in the cabin, but favorite part of all is the ending kiss where she pulls him by the scarf!... EEEEE!!!! That was the PERFECT way to end it. Don't really think I want an HYD3 tho. I think there is definitely enough material and ( Read more... )

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peki March 30 2007, 21:51:54 UTC

Hee, fic! :) Ok, my thoughts if you want them ( ... )

pandapremium March 31 2007, 02:04:47 UTC

No, I really really appreciate you putting your 2 cents in! It's nice to have anyone comment, and I really admire your writing.

I definitely had it going in a more 'she's about to kick him in the balls' direction. I just want him not to look too wimpy when she gets the better of him. But I hate violence against women too (which is why Ginny is mainly picking on Draco). Yeah, I'm probably going to take the pervy!Draco out, their banter is my favorite part anyway. Is their fight pretty well-balanced so far?

It's hard for me to not write "he said, she said". I want to, but I don't really know how. Alternative words just don't come to me.

PS. I really think you should enter the spring dgficexchange if you haven't already!!!

peki March 31 2007, 07:59:27 UTC

Okay, I've reread the last part, and I think if you take out '“Not so tough now… parading around like a fucking queen…”' (this really makes him seem violent and creepy, and the 'queen' reference isn't pureblood thinking, anyway), and the 'lewdly' in one of the last lines, it'll seem less pervy. That, and I think if he gets a moment of pinning her down, she should get one too *g* He'll say something that'll drive her over the egde and she'll kick him in the balls ( ... )