toxic first meeting

[pandastacia]

Pre-NaNo writing! Because if I ever run out of RushSimone scenes, I'll just end up writing some Present Time.
This is the continuation of that half scene I posted... a while ago. & it includes that first part, with some editing. :)
But between this & my next post, there is a huge time skip because there are so many scenes between this one & that one

Comments

[disorientedly]

i felt awful commenting when i hadn't even posted anything yet but NOW I AM COMMENTING and this is really sweet :) gosh i love reading everyone's orig-fic. there are, of course, a few issues with convention (for example, laid versus layed, which... i am pretty sure is not a word - but i digress, my nitpicking is ridiculous) but this is adorable, and they are so young it breaks my heart.

to be honest, this reminds me a startling amount of the fanon relationship between sakura and sasuke :)

[pandastacia]

it's okay! have you finished yours yet?
i think word's spell check sucks that way because it keeps telling me the wrong thing. then again, i can *never* keep track of which is which. >.>

that's curious, because i always think that if i picked up some qualities from naruto for rush, i would've thought itachi (because i am quite obsessed, TYVM. >.>)? it's funny how we see characters differently.

i'll probably come back to this & revamp later because they're so innocent that i feel evil, considering what i've planned for them. @_@

[disorientedly]

i posted the shortest one!! still working on the other two :( :(

if i had more time i'd be a HUMAN SPELL CHECK for you but i have a physics lab due tomorrow :( :( i hope your test(s?) went well today, though!! i'm sure you rocked them.

itachi and sasuke are... almost interchangeable to me, i'm so out of fandom :< except that itachi isn't evil. either way i just never got the impression either of them had any real personalities.

wait but what do you have planned for them?! :( :( they are so cute, i cannot bear to see them suffer :( they are like kittens!

[pandastacia]

i shall go look!

it's okay! i am going to go memorize those rules. =D ewww, i hated physics labs. T_T & i think i at least passed them. if i'm really lucky, i'll have an A! >.>

i've always found sasuke more broody than itachi. itachi's a thoughtful quiet & sasuke's the angsty one? but that's just the way i see them.

uhhh, they get tragedy? because they're absolutely adorable & if they ended up okay, there would be no plot beyond the past part of this story. BUT THERE ARE A LOT OF HAPPY MOMENTS IN-BETWEEN (kinda) & it's... just kinda bittersweet.