Fanfic: "Completion", "Personal Jesus" (Divine/Aki)

[pandir]

I noticed that it gets kind of hard to keep track of my various fanfics, as I somehow posted them all over the web.
So I decided to make things easier by at least posting all of them to my lifejournal!

I will take my time though, cause I don't want to spam.

Have some DivAki for starters! :D
(Yep, 5d's was the fandom where I suddenly wrote smutty,

Comments

[sam_cc]

Looking forward to see what other stories you post, LJ is a good place to keep track of them all. :3

These were both so very intense that from the first few paragraphs I was instantly thinking "the 5d's fandom needs more fics like this", but sadly probably wouldn't be able to handle them. In both of them the charactization of each matched so much that they actually really worked to be read in sequence. Aki's complete devotion to Divine, regardless of not knowing what he's doing, was so very believeable, highlighted by the fact that save for one nameless priest there was no one else in these stories but them. Their connection is absolute at these times and no one else should matter.

Honestly, I don't usually read het smut, but found these really enjoyable.

[pandir]

I'm glad you like it! <3
The first one was more of a try at the whole thing, so it has no own concept, but I hoped it would be nice to read them together.

That utter and complete devotion is what fascinates me most about them.
I'd never written het smut, as I'm usually not much interested in it, but well - Divine/Aki seems always to be an exception to the rule. XDXD

[sam_cc]

There's nothing wrong with having a story that seems to just fill in the gaps in the canon, being something that quite possibly could have happened but we just don't see it on-screen. That in itself is a concept, so I wouldn't say that the first story has none. :3

Divine & Aki are an exception to everything, they're just so wonderful and interesting and why can't everyone else see what we see? Also, a bit off topic, but they are a rare exception to me personal "rule" that I never seem to get into the pairings I think I will when actually watching a series. Before watching 5d's I thought I'd ship them, and I did. That usually never happens. XD

[pandir]

Hah, you're right! I didn't think of that, cause it's what I usually always do. XD
I love fics that could as well have happened in canon.

DivAki is obviously too intriguing and awesome for rules!
I usually try not to ship anything before actually seeing the characters interact, but that rule was broken with Ace Attorney. I shipped almost everything in advance! XD

[mahayana_na]

Those were really good! Your writing style is very beautiful. I was gripped right from the very first paragraph. It's very poetic, I loved the imagery. You can really feel everything that was going on.
I can't say I'm usually a fan of Aki/Divine, but I really enjoyed the psychology behind how you wrote them. I agree with sam_cc above. You do really see only them in the fic, and that's all you NEED to see. Wonderful writing! I look forward to seeing your other works too.

[pandir]

Thanks, I'm especially glad you liked my writing style. :)
The psychology, the dependency and devotion and the slight wrongness is what intrigues me about Divine/Aki.

It doesn't matter whether you like the pairing or not, though, but it's nice you could appreciate the fic anyway.

[mahayana_na]

When something's well written and explores character's relationships and psychology like that, then I find I can read any pairing. XD I liked the more than slightly creepy and wrong undertones. Because somewhere in there, I feel that 5D's genuinely set them there with the intention of being creepy. Along with, you know, child murder and execution duels. I wonder about you sometimes 5D's...

[pandir]

No shit sherlock XD

[karnimolly]

Divine and Aki have, hands down, one of the strongest, most interesting, weirdest, most beautifully fucked up relationship I have ever seen. Re-reading this stuff again just reminded me of it.
And the fact that the psychology is fascinating is not only thanks to your writing, but to exactly that fact mentioned above. But for the 5d's fandom, interesting and multi-layered relationships are something strange and new, aren't they? ;D

However, no matter whether DivAki rocks or not, these fanfictions do it justice. Thank you for writing them, I still adore them a lot ;__;

[pandir]

Right, with its bit of twistedness and multilayeredness, it has got real depth that is intriguing to explore. Not to mention, it's hot. :D

The fandom can't quite handle that, it seems. ;)

I loved writing it (especially for you)! <3 <3 <3