Fanfic: "Career Advancement" (Divine/Jack)

[pandir]

Divine knew when it was wise to obey and keep his head down, and to wait for the right opportunity.

His intelligence and leading qualities had earned him a good position rather quickly, but working one’s way up the ranks took time and effort, even when one was an as dedicated and flawless member of the party as he himself.

In fact, Divine had of

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[winhall]

but lacking the sharp intellect that made Godwin such an excellent officer

...and an opponent not to be underestimated.
Gott, man merkt wirklich, dass Rudger in Jack's Erziehung keine Hand hatte. Eigentlich könnte man unterstellen, dass Jack sich anders entwickelt hätte, wenn Rudger mehr als nur biologisch sein Vater gewesen wäre. Not that he'd be less focused on sex (Jack~), but he might use it to his advantage as well. As he is now, Jack just want sex for the pleasure. A Jack raised by Rudger would use it as a powerful weapon.

“Jack, did your father fuck you?”

*fangirl giggle*
Yes, Jack, did he? Hrhr~

"Sometimes… hits me, too."

Yeah, well, I think we can all agree that a) it's for your own good and b) you enjoy it more than you probably should. ^^x

Ah, Divine, why are you so perfect with whatever character we pair you with!?
Thx for uploading this, it's so pretty! ♥

[pandir]

One has to assume that Rudger hadn't much time for Jack and only realized that the boy was in desperate need for some disciplining when it was too late - and now has a bunch of hard work to do. Which he is probably still too busy for.
Well, that's what military academies are there for.

Divine just accomodates to any setting, and adds an extra amount of awesomeness to everything. :D

♥

[sam_cc]

This was so deliciously wrong and so very perfectly Divine~

In particular, this part stood out to me, "i>Another was that his son was very similar to him in that aspect, but lacking the sharp intellect that made Godwin such an excellent officer." Because, yes, that really does sum up Jack pretty well to me. It's sad that Rudger being Jack's daddy never quite made it to canon when writers such as yourself make it so very believeable too.

[pandir]

Glad you enjoyed this one - I wasn't expecting anyone to comment on this, as I considered it too weird for the 5d's club. XD"

It's good that the Jack-is-Rudger's-son-thing comes across as believable, especially since there's not much characterization in the fic whatsoever.

[sam_cc]

I was never really part of the 5d's club, so crack pairings are right up my alley. XD

B-but what there was of it had Jack being a slut for his daddy, which works for me. :P

[pandir]

I'm relieved to hear that the daddy-thing works for you. XD"""
I'm already embarrassed enough for posting something with Nazi-themes on the web, and my only consolation is that I know my watchers on LJ quite well and am sure they won't judge me too hard. >>

[silver_coins]

I've never seen this show(yu-gi-oh?) and I don't have any plans to... but this fic kind of makes me want to. Cause, well, hot. Hit quite a few kink buttons and left me a bit flustered. Which is a good thing, I assure you. ;)

[pandir]

Wow, I am glad you liked it, despite not being into the show and all (and that you share my weird kinks). :D
I'm flattered you consider it hot, because, well, that's what I aimed for. :P

To be honest, this has nothing to do with what happens in the show, so you didn't miss anything. The series (Yugioh 5d's) actually sucks a lot. XD

[silver_coins]

Well, it was really hot so you definitely pulled that off!

And, well, that's good to know because I have way too many shows on my to watch list right now. :P