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I Can Give You What You Want (That No One Else Can)

Jun 27, 2012 23:59

Title: I Can Give You What You Want (That No One Else Can)
Pairing: HoMin (Girl!Changmin)
Summary: Chanmi, the adopted daughter of Jaejoong, suffers from her very first breakup. Yunho, Jaejoong’s best friend, decides to comfort her in his own way.
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, Smut
Disclaimer: TVXQ are the Kings - we belong to them. Trolol.
A/N: I don’t mind ( Read more... )

media: fanfic, !request, length: oneshot, fandom: tvxq, pairing: changmin × yunho, rating: nc-17

Comments 13

pandragonriyong June 27 2012, 16:00:56 UTC

YO PIMP asalieangel. SPOT FOR YOU
FORGIVE YO HO♥♥♥ ;_;

asalieangel June 30 2012, 06:45:02 UTC

HI. HI HI HI HI HI SORRY I'M LATEU DX

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pandragonriyong July 1 2012, 16:23:18 UTC

AHHHHHH I WANT TO REPLY WITH GIF SPAM BUT THEN I HAVE TO SLEEP SO I'LL MAKE THIS QUICK

YES. THAT TOTALLY MAKES UP FOR IT >8D Post more 2U gifs peureeseu~ :3

HEY. YOU WANTED HIM TO BE PERVERSE D:<

lol imho, the smut sucks. honestly ._.

*stares* That's supposed to be hot? lol sorry Jaejoong TT-TT

loooooooooooooooooooooooooool. Hope you're happeh Ho didn't get the shit beaten out of him :D

YOU BETTER Dx This was awkward to write as fuck D: Now write a MinHoChun for me >8D

asalieangel July 12 2012, 05:35:55 UTC

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isimplicityy June 27 2012, 17:44:12 UTC

Hyori is sexy♥ She's so amazing ;~;.
And as for the age gap... It's not a HUGE one in Korea. A lot of male celebrities get married to females 15+ years younger than them. seventeen is a very common number. Biggest gap I've seen is 19. But yea... It's not too bad ^^.
But...... since Chanmi is a minor... it would be looked down upon.
Chanmi seems a little OOC. I had a hard time imagining her as Changmin. But besides that, I love how Jaejoong approves of them in the end♥. He should still be strict though since Chanmi is only 16 and shouldn't be having an active sex life yet.
Not a huge fan of het either, but since it's HoMin it's awesome~ ♥.
Oh god, I can actually imagine Yunho bawling like a baby after Jae broke up with him xD. /squishes/ Jaejoong should join in their love party! /bricked/

pandragonriyong July 1 2012, 16:04:02 UTC

Amazing for breaking up with Chanmi and eventually getting HoMin together? ... yeah she is xD :p
LOL I HAVE A CHANCE WITH YUNHO THEN xD *shot*
Seoul is also a homophobic country so ... > <
lolol. asalieangel wanted shy!Chanmi and dirtytalker!Yunho so yeah :p And yeah I can't even imagine Changmin Dx I can only imagine Junghee D: (SHINee's Jonghyun's girl name xD)
LOL TELL THAT TO JAE. HE'S LIKE THE SLUT OF THE CENTURY. I can already see him getting it on with Yunyun at around 15 xD
HoMin makes everything awesome >D ... I guess xD
He needs the love~ =w= WAIT. HOLD IT RIGHT THERE QURL. I ALREADY HAVE LIKE TEN THOUSAND AND ONE JAEHOMIN FICS IN MY WORKSPACE. DON'T DEFILE JAEHOMIN WITH OT3 SOMEWHAT INCEST HET SEX. I'll dedicate one to you occay? Dx xD

rinmi June 27 2012, 18:25:05 UTC

I can't believe I just read that lol but it was good. I'm ,glad I decided to see :) yes at times I thot Yun n min was ooc but overall cute. Jae is like thcoolest dad ever. Adopt me jae ;;

pandragonriyong July 1 2012, 15:57:07 UTC

lolol. The requester wanted shy!Chanmi and dirty talker!Yunho so I had to make them as much of that as possible. And yes he's the cooliest :p Thanks for reading :D

n3uromanc3r June 28 2012, 10:54:49 UTC

I liked the story, although I found it a little bit disappointing how they already ended up in bed together. I wanted Yunho to wait, I just couldn't imagine his feelings being as deep and sincere how he told. Last time they met Chanmi was a kid, and now meeting again after three years he just sleeps his best friends daughter without protection!

But Jae was so cool, I really liked him... I wonder where he after he sent Yunho to find Chanmi... : D

pandragonriyong July 1 2012, 15:54:52 UTC

Yeah about that *cue fail author trying to explain herself* You see I'm not very good with writing heterosexual sex so I wanted to get it over with. I'm so sorry T~T
But still thank you for taking the time to read this piece of crap xD

Oh crap. I forgot to mention. Yeah anyway he just went out to talk with his boss that's all *shot* x_x

natalia452 June 29 2012, 21:18:45 UTC

This was kinda weird hahaha :P its weird for me not to see yunjae, im just to it

pandragonriyong July 1 2012, 15:39:55 UTC

omg i know I'm so sorry it's weird for me too Dx
lolol I'm not xD But thanks for reading this piece of crap anyway~ :D

natalia452 July 11 2012, 23:35:49 UTC

no :p it was nice you know, but i was like o.O all the time xD sorry, hope to read a next update soon <3