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Team Spencer: All That Glitters Is Not Gold

Oct 06, 2008 13:58

Title: Priorities
Team: Team Spencer
Prompt: All That Glitters Is Not Gold
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ryan Ross and Brendon Urie
Summary: Brendon Urie always thought fame would be amazing. He wanted to make it so badly, but now that he has he realizes that it’s not all it’s cracked up to be.
Word Count: 4,252 Words
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round i, prompt:all that glitters is not gold, pairing:ryan/brendon, length:short, rating:pg-13, team:spencer

Comments 1

melish October 6 2008, 21:11:16 UTC

overall this was well-written, but i felt like it lagged a little in some parts. i'm not sure if it was deliberate, but you were very obvious in explaining to the audience how brendon was feeling when we would have gotten it ourselves with or without detail. i think the whole bitchy girlfriend idea was slightly overdone though. cute ending!