Title:Reaching That Famous Happy End (So Close and Still So Far)
Team: Team Spencer!
Prompt: A chain is only as strong as its weakest link
Rating: R
Pairing: Brendon/Spencer
Summary: Brendon just wants his songs on the album. What happens when Ryan throws his music back in his face?
Warnings: NONE
Word count: 9,255
Notes: Thanks to my beta for
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I really like Brendon-angst, just so you know. But wow, Jwalk and Ryan were such assholes in this, for serious. :( To me, it didn't feel right, I dunno, how Ryan realized he was being a douchebag the way he did, or how Jon and Ryan are such bad friends. :(
Poor Brendon...at least it had a happy ending. :3
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As for con-crit, I thought how it was put together was somewhat, not sloppy, but it's the first word that comes to mind. You couldn't tell if it was a flashback or if it was going in order and was somewhat confusing in that respect. There was also a few errors I spotted reading through; it needed to be beta'd.
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