Team Spencer: A Chain Is No Stronger Than Its Weakest Link

Oct 13, 2008 18:49

Title:Reaching That Famous Happy End (So Close and Still So Far)
Team: Team Spencer!
Prompt: A chain is only as strong as its weakest link
Rating: R
Pairing: Brendon/Spencer
Summary: Brendon just wants his songs on the album. What happens when Ryan throws his music back in his face?
Warnings: NONE
Word count: 9,255
Notes: Thanks to my beta for ( Read more... )

prompt:a chain is no stronger than its w, round i, length:medium, pairing:brendon/spencer, team:spencer, rating:r

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xbeax October 14 2008, 03:31:05 UTC
Finally, this community needs more spencer/brendon.

I really like Brendon-angst, just so you know. But wow, Jwalk and Ryan were such assholes in this, for serious. :( To me, it didn't feel right, I dunno, how Ryan realized he was being a douchebag the way he did, or how Jon and Ryan are such bad friends. :(

Poor Brendon...at least it had a happy ending. :3

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morrisseyislove October 19 2008, 04:58:03 UTC
I really liked this story. I liked the concept for the story, I liked how their relationshipped formed over time instead of just being thrown right out in there, a problem I tend to have. Brencer is my OTP, fo rizzle, and I am so happy when there is Spencer/Brendon, so definite thanks for that.

As for con-crit, I thought how it was put together was somewhat, not sloppy, but it's the first word that comes to mind. You couldn't tell if it was a flashback or if it was going in order and was somewhat confusing in that respect. There was also a few errors I spotted reading through; it needed to be beta'd.

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