Comments | panitik_ni_dops: "BLEEDING MOUTH"

doppelgangerqaf in panitik_ni_dops

"BLEEDING MOUTH"

Nov 30, 2009 23:33

TITLE: "BLEEDING MOUTH"
AUTHOR: A. R.
BETAED BY: bigj52 (You are awesome!)
RATING: R for graphic description.
GENRE: Flash fiction.
WORD COUNT: 100 words.
A/N: Suggestions, criticisms are all welcome! Thanks!

( BLEEDING MOUTH )

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Comments 10

ktvn December 1 2009, 05:33:36 UTC

This is beautiful, in a tragic sort of way. If that makes any sense.

doppelgangerqaf December 1 2009, 05:40:13 UTC

It does make sense to me. And that is life, beauty and tragedy, is it not? Sometimes we have to see tragedy before we realize beauty. And/or vice versa. If that makes sense ;O)

Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate you stopping by!

*Dops

camjakefan December 1 2009, 05:56:37 UTC

This made me feel so sad. You could feel her pain.

pam81 December 1 2009, 11:24:22 UTC

This was incredibly intense.
You made an amazing work.

bkrave December 1 2009, 15:44:18 UTC

Beautiful,sad,scary,intense

geckoholic December 1 2009, 15:53:44 UTC

Wow, that packs a punch . . .