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Apr 09, 2004 13:33

Strand

Overflowing with the opportunity to take flight above the marine.
Where I’ll witness the smog you brought when you came down.
Alongside the sand I rubbed in your eye, blinded-so charming.

Whata walking stick

Countless Markets
I don’t want to rinse off what I’ve done ( Read more... )

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meaning? anonymous April 9 2004, 10:53:12 UTC
what do you mean? explanation please

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Re: meaning? panjo April 9 2004, 11:03:55 UTC


Strand:
regretting opportunities that were never taken but blaming it on others.
Putting there mistakes/weight on others
"whata walking stick"

Countless Markets:
Not wanting to forget something you've done , but it hurts to remember.

These poems have alot more depth if you read between the lines and take in consideration every word and how it's used.I just choose to be all lame and not give the full explanation,just the gist of it all.I need to stop wrting abstract,i'ma loser

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friskywaffle April 9 2004, 12:10:33 UTC
very nice ;)

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