:O ... That was... wow. Do you know something funny? I've thought about Light being an incubus more than once too. Controlling, demanding, blood thirsty, alluring and beautiful. Not even L could resist him XD Great job, hon *chu*
I guess great minds just think alike!^^ Hehe - I think the incubus thing actually came out from a orig fic that I'm planning. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
Love it *___* I remember reading first part sometime ago, and I'm even more then happy now for seeing second part! I like the way you....operates with language? with words? Don't know the right idiom, but I just mean that I really like Your writing style. I can't give much of constructive criticism, since english is not my first language ^^; Just, anyway, I love it. Really really love it. Both parts literally gives me shivers XD moooooore?
Thank you for reading and for all your wonderful comments! *hugs* I'm happy that you like my writing style. And your English seems just fine to me! Hehe - I plan to write some more - I just need to find the time! But holidays are almost over! Happy Holidays!
Like I said--it's always really hard looking over your fics because you're such a great writer. <3
*_* But I'm very happy that I was able to help you along and help you add some things. <3 I'm very happy with how much description you added.
I usually don't use this word because I feel as though there are better ones--but I feel this one fits quite well: It's just... HOT. O__O; I mean, everything about it. I'm glad you worked on the second part--and I send you congrats on a job well done, lovely. ;P
YOU AND THOSE LAST LINES. [AND THE SECOND TO LAST LINE AS WELL, IN THIS CASE.] Always remarkable. ^^ <3
But you did a wonderful job looking over this fic. Thanks again! (Hehe - these comments from such an awesome writer as yourself are such great Christmas presents!)
"Hot?" *Does happy dance* Panther wrote something hot! (sorry, mixture of boredom and tiredness = double alert)
Truthfully, those lines weren't even supposed to be in this part. I just put them aside in the middle of writing and almost forgot about them. So, I'm really glad they fit!
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Haha - I just noticed that your icon moves. Cute!
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I remember reading first part sometime ago, and I'm even more then happy now for seeing second part!
I like the way you....operates with language? with words? Don't know the right idiom, but I just mean that I really like Your writing style. I can't give much of constructive criticism, since english is not my first language ^^;
Just, anyway, I love it. Really really love it. Both parts literally gives me shivers XD
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I'm happy that you like my writing style. And your English seems just fine to me!
Hehe - I plan to write some more - I just need to find the time! But holidays are almost over!
Happy Holidays!
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Like I said--it's always really hard looking over your fics because you're such a great writer. <3
*_* But I'm very happy that I was able to help you along and help you add some things. <3 I'm very happy with how much description you added.
I usually don't use this word because I feel as though there are better ones--but I feel this one fits quite well: It's just... HOT. O__O; I mean, everything about it. I'm glad you worked on the second part--and I send you congrats on a job well done, lovely. ;P
YOU AND THOSE LAST LINES. [AND THE SECOND TO LAST LINE AS WELL, IN THIS CASE.] Always remarkable. ^^ <3
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But you did a wonderful job looking over this fic. Thanks again! (Hehe - these comments from such an awesome writer as yourself are such great Christmas presents!)
"Hot?" *Does happy dance* Panther wrote something hot! (sorry, mixture of boredom and tiredness = double alert)
Truthfully, those lines weren't even supposed to be in this part. I just put them aside in the middle of writing and almost forgot about them. So, I'm really glad they fit!
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