DN fanfic: Intrinsic Rivalry, Part 1

Jan 07, 2007 13:48

Title: Intrinsic Rivalry, part 1 ( Read more... )

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kimiessu January 8 2007, 19:29:30 UTC
Oh. *sighs happily* I enjoyed it all right. Ah, it's 3.30 A.M. here, so I can't really describe just how much I enjoyed it in words, but I'll have you know that I'm still doing a happy little squee-ing dance over here despite my sleepiness. Damn this insomnia! Maybe it's contagious -- *blinks* it's all that Death Note I've been reading.

You've got a wonderful grasp on Near's characterisation... and Mello is just... *laughs* Mello, even if you don't include his POV in here. I really think you've caught them nicely in words, and... yeah, I apologise for my severely lacking vocabulary right now, but *yawn* ♥ *_* You = teh win. So, yes. &heart; Keep it up, ya! *memories* x)

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pantherrose January 9 2007, 00:27:15 UTC
Thanks for reading! And now you should get some sleep!

You think I portrayed Near all right? *joins in squeeing dance*. I'm always worried with new charas (and Near is def. different than the usual).

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brauchen_dich January 10 2007, 00:59:08 UTC
Hmm, interesting! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. :)

I loved Near's almost obsession with Mello... You really have a way with words, my friend.

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brauchen_dich January 10 2007, 00:59:57 UTC
LJ ate some of my comment... Again!~ XD; I just said: "Don't keep us waiting! XD I want to know what happens next!~"

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pantherrose January 12 2007, 03:35:33 UTC
Thanks for reading! Haha (I want to know what happens next too!...you didn't see that^^) I truly do have a faint idea...

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