DN fanfic: Intrinsic Rivalry, Part 2

[pantherrose]

Intrinsic Rivalry, Part 2
Fandom: Death Note
Pairing: Near/Mello
Rating: PG-13ish?
Notes: Near tracks down Mello for a face-to-face confrontation.
Part 1: http://pantherrose.livejournal.com/22069.html

Comments

[kimiessu]

Very IC, very dark, very sensual. *grin* Awesome as always, really. Just one small thing: What makes he and Mello so different from all the people he’d crossed in this life? 'What makes he?' That aside, lovely. ♥ Nyaaaan~ XD

[pantherrose]

Haha - thanks for the correction (little tired yesterday so I must've looked over it). And thanks very much for commenting and reading!

[kimiessu]

*beams* XDDDD ♥ You're welcome~ BTW! Do you have MSN? 8DDD *dork*

[pantherrose]

No, I don't! But I probably should get on, shouldn't I? Haha - I'm so sad with comps that I don't even have IM with the Yahoo account I use.
My rl friends don't get on that much (still awaiting facebook messages from some...), but I've been meaning to check it out.

[kurosaki_akane]

Very nice!! I love it when Mello gets control over Near and wants to get any reaction out of him (*o*)
Mello can be really scary and possessive, though we all know that he'd never want to seriously hurt Near, even if he does as if he would (>w<) *loves*

But I'm curious, is this fanfic Mello x Near or Near x Mello? @@
So far it seems MxN, but you stated that it's NxM... I'm confused (x_x) *can't take Near seme well*

[pantherrose]

Thank you for reading and commenting!
Nah, I don't think Mello could hurt Near, either.
Oops, sorry for confusing you. Ummm...I'm not really sure? I already have an outline for how the fic would go, but it sometimes changes when I try to write it all out.
And why don't you like seme Near?! I've seen some hotness derived from that pairing.

[kurosaki_akane]

Well, Near is too small (way shorter than Mello), physically weak, passive and too cute to be seme (^^;
He might have mind control over Mello, but I fail to see how Near could physically control him, considering that Mello is bigger, stronger, used to fights, more passionate and obsessive, and would die before letting Near take such control over him.
I find seme Near quite OOC, though this is just a personal opinion, of course.

Anyway, I'll keep reading your fanfic, I'm intrigued to know what will happen (^^)

[pantherrose]

Hmmm...you do have a very good point. Haha - much better argument than what I could come up with! They sure are an interesting duo.

I've noticed you around the DN group (you have one of the cutest icons - where is it from?). And would you mind if I friend you?

[katamanda]

Oh my XD What a great dark fic! I love the whole turnaround on Near, Mello is completely unpredictable! I can't wait for the next chapter!

[pantherrose]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

Gah, and thanks for reminding me how far behind I am! (I totally need a prod every now and then^^)