Comments | pantherrose: DN Fanfic: Savior

pantherrose

DN Fanfic: Savior

Jan 24, 2007 13:55

Ack, I forgot to warn this one hasn't been Beta'd yet (any takers?). I'll have to take care of that when I finally get the time ( Read more... )

death note, raito, ryuzaki, fanfiction

Comments 30

kurosaki_akane January 24 2007, 22:01:46 UTC

@_____@ *shocked*
This was so disturbingly good! I never saw Raito and L's relationship as a romantic one but as a very twisted one @@; (well, Mello and Near are the same, haha). You portrayed it greatly (>o<)

I'm not English speaker, so I can't tell how well writen this was, but I really enjoyed it!~

pantherrose January 25 2007, 17:32:39 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!
Yeah, Mello and Near do have an odd relationship, but that's why I love it!

artemisgoddess January 24 2007, 22:28:10 UTC

Loved the premise. The transitions were semi-awkward, though, and really took away from the fic. I love your characterization of their relationship, though. Well done.

pantherrose January 24 2007, 23:22:16 UTC

Would you mind telling me what you thought was off? I'm going to try to find someone to beta when I have the time, but I'm sooo loaded with hw at the moment.
And thanks for reading!

harazyn January 25 2007, 06:38:31 UTC

Wow. Rape me, my friend.
;D

pantherrose January 25 2007, 17:29:30 UTC

*Laughs* I'm think I may be closer to being uke material, but if you insist...
Thanks for reading!

harazyn January 26 2007, 05:34:25 UTC

Hahahaaa~~ so you want me to be your Ligh...er~~ daddy instead? XD

kimiessu January 25 2007, 10:31:55 UTC

GUH. ♥ Hawt. 8DDDD

Hey! I'd love to beta for you. I'll have to do it Friday evening or something though, not too soon. D:

That aside, this was lovely! Ooh, smut. *grin* But, yeah, I have to agree with artemisgoddess - there's something slightly off about the flow of the fic.

Ugh, I feel your pain. *loaded with hw, too*

*HUGS* 8DDDDDDD The world needs more L/R/L smut, dammit. *shakes fists at the oyster that is the world*

pantherrose January 25 2007, 10:51:12 UTC

Ah, would you?! And take your time (I'm supposed to be doing hw right now, anyways^^). Also, I noticed that you didn't have a beta for yours - feel free to ask.

Thanks muchly for reading!

Good luck with your work! Now, I must get back to mine! (*cries*)

There can never be too much smut! *hugs back*

vanitas_mundi January 29 2007, 21:58:46 UTC

*___* Good stuff! I like it how L is, in a twisted way, happy to have Raito by his side despite everything. Love the last part of it ♥

pantherrose January 30 2007, 21:48:27 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, L was kinda messed up in this fic...

Haha - I can't stop looking at that icon. It's simply wonderful.